Date: 01/06/11 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 20
GOD DAMN YOU BOB!!! YOU ARE SUCH AN ASSHOLE YOU REFUSE TO BELIEVE ANYTHiNG!!! GAHHH! Aaron was a prick. He should be more than smacked! I freaking love Angel. She is right about everything she said. I think Aaron was going to agree with Kevin but Bob has them all like puppets. Damn you Jane for interrupting! Loved the chapter
Author's Response: After all that ranting are YOU sure you love the chapter? Just kidding! Thanks for the review - Jen
Date: 01/06/11 04:05 am Title: Chapter 19
"Kev, I have one more request," I said. He looked at me.
"What?"
I glanced back over at Becky longingly. "I wanna see Nurse Busty naked."
LOL; so Nick, haha. I think there is a chance with Becky! I hope so <3
Author's Response: How could anyone deny a dying man's wish? rotfl! - Jen
Date: 01/06/11 03:46 am Title: Chapter 19
We're getting closer and closer...lol at Nick getting a striptease. Can't wait for more.
Date: 01/06/11 03:35 am Title: Chapter 19
does it work... does it ....well ???
dang it i wanna know!!!
this chapter had me laughing sooo hard!!!
Author's Response: LoL does it? You'll have to wait and see!
Date: 01/06/11 03:35 am Title: Chapter 19
Aww how funny is this chapter,I hope Nick gets his wish to ravish betty once he wakes up from her kiss. lol I hope it works.
LOL @ Kris saying to kevin how come he never kisses he like that anymore to funny. I thought this chapter was awesome,keep up the great work. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Yeah Kris is a little JEAAAALLLOUUUSS. Kev needs to step it up! :) You can imagine that Nick would ravish Becky now if he could.
Date: 01/06/11 03:31 am Title: Chapter 19
I bet Bob has fucking made it so Kevin can't get in. Asshole!!!!!
And Becky has GOT to be the one!!!! She has just GOT to be!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 01/06/11 03:11 am Title: Chapter 19
AWWWW at Nick and Becky. LMAO "do ghosts get boners" and Nick loving Becky's body. She better get her butt down there and kiss him before I do it myself! I had to LOL at Kristin being jealous of Nick's kissing skills, I know I would be. Great chapter as always
Author's Response: You KNOW you'd run down there and kiss him yourself! No problem there. :) I think EVERY girl in this world could be weakened by his charm...well, at least his looks! - Jen
Date: 01/06/11 03:01 am Title: Chapter 19
Even Nick's spirit body can turn a girl on...OMG...lol. I give credit for Becky giving him a strip tease. I bet that felt weird for her
Author's Response: LoL it would be weird knowing someone was watching and not actually SEEING them. Nick is just super talented in the romance department. :) - Jen
Date: 01/05/11 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 18
Aw, this was a great chap. Love the twist with the nurse. Can't wait to see what'll happen.
Date: 01/05/11 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 18
Oh shit this was really good but I have a feeling it will end sadly. You two really have a talent for writing together.
Marguerite
Date: 01/05/11 06:10 am Title: Chapter 18
Aaaw, so cute with the sharks, is so nice that Kevin is helping Nick <3
Date: 01/05/11 04:23 am Title: Chapter 18
Aww this was such a sweet chapter and Nick was in the pic that's just an aww moment.lol kevin is running out of time,Nurse Betty needs to get to nick to kiss him so he can wake up. lol
Date: 01/05/11 03:59 am Title: Chapter 18
Aw, how sweet of Kevin to do that for Nick. Great chapter.
Date: 01/05/11 03:52 am Title: Chapter 18
Figures Nick sorta shows up on camera-lol.
Becky needs to kiss him NOW!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 01/05/11 03:40 am Title: Chapter 18
awww...the photo...Nick's in the photo
Where are the guys' brains. Get Becky to kiss Nick....Duh...lol (I so want her to kiss him and wake him up)
Can't wait to see what's next.
Author's Response: Is someone a little impatient? Hmmmmm?
