Date: 01/04/11 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 16
Awww you write all the characters so well. I love it! I hope that Nurse Betty is the ONE so Nick can finally wake up. Yay to Daddy Richardson Mode,I think the last 18 hours will be fun for nick to at least have some fun before he goes if he does go. HMM I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: I'm just very happily impressed with how well we BOTH write the characters and that character integrity - especially of "other" characters like Becky and Brian and people we aren't writing the POV from - isn't compromised by the dual authorship. I know it's challenging to try to write Nick to the caliper that Jen does! It's a lot of fun, too, though! ...Thanks for the review!! <3Pengi
Date: 01/04/11 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 16
Thank-you Kevin!!!! Now convince her to kiss him, & wake him UP all ready!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 01/04/11 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 15
Oye vey in a half shell.
This angry fan right here *points to self* will stop Bob for y'all!!!!!! Now that he's here, it makes it much easier to beat him with my sticks before ramming them up his good for nothing ass.
Fuck Bob, this isn't about YOU or how Jane fucking makes you feel shitty. It's about NICK!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 01/04/11 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 15
Yep, this is what I thought a few chapters ago...something Nick said about Lauren. Your one true love is a very powerful thing. Let's hope!
Author's Response: Of course Nick has a thing for Lauren still. After all she DID dump him... - Jen
Date: 01/04/11 08:55 am Title: Chapter 15
OMG, they contacted Lauren! Maybe she is the one, I hope she is! And I hope Nick's father don't do anything stupid. Next :)
Date: 01/04/11 05:08 am Title: Chapter 15
This was such a cute chapter,Loved it! I Hope this time it works and I know it maybe to predictable it being her but I hope it is because they make a good couple I know it's not real life but I like happy endings and it would be such a great ending to have Lauren be the ONE.lol Keep up the great work.
Date: 01/04/11 04:39 am Title: Chapter 15
Awwww this was a cute chapter.
And also? Bob's an asshole. Loved it. :)
Author's Response: Yeah Bob's our archnemisis. Can u imagine the fan outcry if he did this URL?
Date: 01/04/11 04:34 am Title: Chapter 15
Here goes nothing...let's see if Lauren "helps" or not...thanks for another chapter.
Date: 01/04/11 04:30 am Title: Chapter 15
Hmmm...I'm not sure Lauren is the one. I guess I will just have to see.
I hate Bob Carter. Ugg...he's a big jerk.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 01/04/11 04:30 am Title: Chapter 15
Oh I really hope this works. Bob is too much of a coward to stand up to Jane so he will pull the plug on his own son. Bastard. PLease update soon.
Marguerite
Date: 01/04/11 04:28 am Title: Chapter 15
Somehow I don't think Lauren is the one to wake him up...but its cute how Kevin is confused about her. Loved the chapter as always. Made me smile just a little....
Date: 01/04/11 03:33 am Title: Chapter 14
I'm so afraid what Nick's father is going to do. The guys must change his mind! Update soon :D
Date: 01/04/11 02:26 am Title: Chapter 14
Please!!! Fix it!!! Don't let him die!!!
I love it more everyday!!!
Date: 01/03/11 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 14
FUCK BOB!!!!! Do they NOT realize Nick gave Kevin the fucking right to decide for a fucking reason!?!?!?!?! They should've fucking contacted Kevin!!!! FUDCKING SON OF A BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!! *goes hunting for Bob with my pointy sticks* If you fucking pull the plugs I will kill YOU, you fucking asshole!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. Nick has GOT to wake up!!!! Nurse Bekcy has GOT to kiss him all ready!!!!!!!
Author's Response: ::hides in a corner and waits for the rant to be over:: - On behalf of Pengi and myself, thanks for the review! I personally always enjoy your P.S.'s - Jen
Date: 01/03/11 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 14
and now it gets intense...that's low really low coming from nick's...DAD?? i mean it's normally jane thats targeted... nice twist
i love the twitter reference...chirp....lol
and Now we see why nick gave kevin control
Author's Response: I love that it's Bob instead of Jane. I'm always a sucker for evil Jane stories but evil Bob? right on! - Jen
