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Reviewer: Carterkid Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/14 02:37 am Title: Epilogue

perfect ending

Author's Response: I wanted the ending to be like Wizard Of Oz. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Carterkid Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/14 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 10

the story is great just one little thing, it went by to fast if you get what I mean

Author's Response: It was always meant as a short story. I wrote it for fun mostly. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Carterkid Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/14 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 9

OMG AJ??? Why AJ?

Author's Response: I will have to go read this chapter again but AJ is the wizard because he is also known as Jizzle lol

Reviewer: Carterkid Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/14 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 8

LOVE the part about the annoying girlfriend

Author's Response: Lol me too. Thanks!

Reviewer: Carterkid Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/14 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 7

poor tin man they won't even let him talk, where did you get the word jizzle from anyways?

Author's Response: If you watch Nicks Corner on YouTube there is a video where Nick calls himself and AJ Nizzle and Jizzle. The title of this story was a suggestion by Mare.

Reviewer: Carterkid Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/14 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 6

the story is super! I think it's different because I never read a take off a movie

Author's Response: This was when I was in a movie story phase. I started a Twister inspired one that is still on hiatus. It's only a couple chapters long though.

Reviewer: Carterkid Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/14 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 5

the winking lion is so funny great job!

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: Carterkid Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/14 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 4

Okay, why is it people think Kevin talks so slow?? I guess it must be the fact he lost his Kentucky accent maybe?

The story is funny :)

Author's Response: With this story I wanted to do old school BSB humor and back then people made fun of how Kevin talked slowly lol

Reviewer: Carterkid Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/14 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 3

Brian is the scarecrow right? He's a little short for the job lol

Author's Response: Yes but that was the point that he's too short and friendly to scare the crows away lol.

Reviewer: Carterkid Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/14 04:11 am Title: Chapter 2

At the top you have...you dropped a bus on Mandy, the Witch of the West then you have East near the last part lol

I like the idea of using Paris,Mandy,and
Leighanne

Author's Response: Thanks, I had to go back and read it to make sure but you're right. I sometimes write very late at night so I make small mistakes which I miss. I will go and fix that now :) I thought having paris in the story was a great idea you'll see why later LOL

Reviewer: Carterkid Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/14 04:02 am Title: Chapter 1

Hi there! I wanted to let you know I'm getting started on the challenge! Great start

Author's Response: Thanks for choosing the story. Was wondering when you'd get around to reading mine. Hope you enjoy it. This was fun for me to write.

Reviewer: tiggerc128 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/11 05:56 pm Title: Epilogue

aww PERFECT!  great story!



Author's Response: I guess I missed responding to a lot of reviews for this story. Glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: tiggerc128 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/11 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 10

hehe Can't stop giggling. I love the line about letting Arnold run Cali! 



Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Just_Me Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/11 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 7

Favorite line of the chapter, "I think I prefer our rabid fans to these things..."



Author's Response: Glad you liked it, thank you!

Reviewer: Just_Me Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/11 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 4

This chapter made me laugh out loud, especially when you incorporated "That's hot!"  Loving this story so far!