Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/11 09:11 pm Title: The Girls

I really liked this. Personally I would like to see this turned into a story. Maybe as her journal of their life together. Either way keep up the great work.
Marguerite

Author's Response:

thanks so much! maybe i'll expand it - i do like the idea. :)

Reviewer: Amber Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/11 05:00 pm Title: The Girls

I like it so far...Interested to see where this story goes.  Good start! :)

Author's Response:

i meant this to be a short story, just this one chapter, but perhaps i will expand. thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/11 07:13 am Title: The Girls

I just loved it! Was so cute!

But these moments are mine and the times when we walk the parking lots behind hotels because there’s nowhere else to get fresh air – those are my moments too. And when he lays next to me and tells me he loves me- it’s mine and no one else knows what it’s like. The day we spent hiding from everyone because he didn’t want to be found – it’s ours because no one else ever even found out we were hiding on purpose. And every little whispered word at dawn and all the times he kisses me – belong only to me.

Aaaw, loved it <3 Amazing job!

Author's Response:

thank you! im glad you liked it!

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/11 05:31 am Title: The Girls

I love it. It does put things into perspective. It's not easy to be a girlfriend, but I'm sure they feel for us because they get why we love them. Good work.

Author's Response:

thanks for reading and reviewing, im glad you liked it!