Date: 09/02/12 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 13
Great story so far!!
Author's Response:
thanks for the review! I really hope that I can focus on this story soon. It is the first time I've tried this type of story and I find I got myself a bit stuck, trying to work things out in my head before continuing. I hope that I will have an update soon. :) Thanks again for the review!
Date: 05/03/12 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 13
Man it's going to be a false positive, isn't it? :( I hope not. And really thought I had one more chapter to read. You got me hooked again Lore! Can't wait for more! :-)
Author's Response:
Yah sorry this one was so short, I gotta be in the right mood to write this story! I'm glad I hooked you again Rachel :) Thanks for the review I hope you enjoy this story even though it's a tough subject matter.
Date: 05/03/12 02:49 am Title: Chapter 13
Ooo, a new chapter!! I was so happy to see this on the recent list! :) I'm so glad she's pregnant - I'm hoping it works out for them! :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you are happy for an update. I am trying to work on it more, I really am. I hope this can start coming out of my head more but I have such different stories from this that I am writing that it's hard to go from something unusual to something so angsty for me. Thanks for the review Tri.
Date: 03/14/12 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh geez... That has to be incredibly difficult for Laney to be going through. I can't imagine how much writing this story must take out of you, too! It's such a heavy subject matter... I give you credit for tackling it - and doing so well! I'm looking forward to reading more... I hope that things look up for them soon.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review! It is difficult to write at times but it actually helps me with my emotions more than it taking it out of me. I am glad you are enjoying it. :)
Date: 03/14/12 01:47 am Title: Chapter 11
Aww, they're such a cute couple... Even though things aren't happening baby-wise, they're still a great couple and I hope that it doesn't tear them apart. I can't wait for more. Please update soon! :)
Author's Response:
They are easy to write and I do enjoy writing them as a couple. We shall see what happens between them as time goes on, if this will tear them apart or not. I will work on an update but no promises, this is a hard story in general for me to write. Thanks for reading and reviewing, it means a lot to me.
Date: 03/14/12 01:45 am Title: Chapter 10
Aww... I feel so bad for the two of them! I just want them to get a positive result... I am SO glad to see that you updated today, though!
Author's Response:
I feel bad for them too, getting that plus sign or double line would sure be a blessing for them. Thanks for the review Tri.
Date: 03/14/12 12:56 am Title: Chapter 9
I'm so glad they got the house! I cracked up a lot during this chapter... When Brian said he could get more money from the clothes haha. :) And the orgy talk! It was a nice break from her being depressed... But I don't know how long it'll last. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks, it was fun to write the teasing part of this chapter. It was a nice break from the relatively depressing nature of this story. Thanks for the review Tri.
Date: 03/13/12 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh man... I feel bad for her. Googling medical stuff is always such a bad idea, though! lol. I'm anxious to read more. I hope that Laney can find some happiness to combat her depression, though! Great job with this... I love how you're conveying such real emotion.
Author's Response:
Thanks for that Tri, sometimes I think the emotion is getting too depressing at times. I hope that Laney doesn't get depressed too often, it's hard to write and hard to get out of... and who likes to read about depressed people? Thanks for the review Tri.
Date: 03/13/12 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 7
Well, she seems like she's in a bit of a better mood, at least... It's gotta be hard wanting a baby and going through all of the trials and tribulations they're dealing with. I hope that Brian's time away won't upset her even more about things. I'm anxious to hear about the house, too! Great job. I love their playful side. :)
Author's Response:
I love their playful side too and it's something different for me to write so I hope it comes across real. Soemtimes the first chapter flows so easily and then I forget how I did it so I hope to continue their playful banter. Thanks for the review Tri.
Date: 03/13/12 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 6
The same thing that the nurse said actually happened to someone I know, too! So hopefully it will be a good thing for Laney down the line... Good chapter! Glad they got some answers.
Author's Response:
Really? oh good cause I completely made that part up! *whistles* LOL thanks for the review Tri.
Date: 03/13/12 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 5
Eesh! What is going on with her? I'm anxious for answers... I can't imagine what the two of them are going through, if reading about it is this bad!
Author's Response:
I can.. *sigh* It is scary and I hope that things work out for them. Thanks for the review Tri.
Date: 03/13/12 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
Geesh - so many emotions in this chapter! I was excited about the house, but now I'm wondering what's up with Laney... I hope she's all right!
Author's Response:
there are a lot of emotions througout the entire story. I hope that the story reads clear because of all the emotions in it the story might get confusing and I hope it doesn't. Thanks for the review Tri!
Date: 03/13/12 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh man... That's gotta be rough to hear. I'm anxious to read more to "see" if they make any strides despite the diagnosis. Good chapter!
Author's Response:
it is rough to hear... thanks for the review Tri.
Date: 03/13/12 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
Aww... I feel bad that it wasn't positive, but there's nothing like practicing! ;-) Cute chapter - I really liked how awkward Brian was in the pregnancy test aisle. It's funny how men can come off like such prudes when in the presence of condoms and whatnot!
I promised myself I couldn't write today until I finished my homework, but I didn't say anything about reading... So here I am! LOL. I've been meaning to catch up in this story. :)
Author's Response:
aw no writing ... I'd tell you to stop reading so you can write more of yours but you are reading mine so I guess I should be happy to distract you! LOL. I used my own husband for that awkwardness, the first time we had to get a pregnancy test he was uncomfortable because all the tests, the condoms and the jellys are together at the end of an aisle where everyone passing can see what you are looking at. Thanks for the review Tri.
Date: 03/12/12 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 10
Just caught up on this, and wow! you're building this so perfectly.
Author's Response:
yay for Karin catching up on my story! The one I struggle the most with writing too. LOL. Thanks for reading Karin and letting me know that you are, means a lot to me.
