Date: 07/27/11 02:14 am Title: Chapter 16: The Very Hungry Caterpillar
Love this story. It's really good and different. Can't wait for more. Glad ray took control. Nick needs her love just like he needs max. As much as max needs nick I think nick needs max just as much.
Date: 07/27/11 01:14 am Title: Chapter 15: Go Fish
Ah this was sweet. Raine & Nick made Max feel comfortable. I am still hoping for them to adopt him. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Date: 07/26/11 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 14: The House Where Nick Lives
Max seems to be making progress. Hopefully he can get used to Raine. She would be a great mother to him. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Date: 07/26/11 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 13: Sam's Family
I'm so glad you picked this story up again, I really like it. It's so cute. I love Max and Nick. You have created some beautiful characters.
Date: 07/26/11 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 13: Sam's Family
Sam's new family bugged me. Nick was doing a good thing and right away they assumed the worst. However I am glad Sam found a home. Now for Max to get one with Nick & Raine. Keep up the excellent work.
MArguerite
Date: 07/26/11 06:13 am Title: Chapter 1: The Boy in the Cardboard Box
I just started this and it's fantastic! I would totally buy this in a book story.
Date: 07/25/11 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 12: Chinese Food on the Living Room Carpet
Oh I have a feeling Raine has a thing for Nick. Hopefully both will act on it and maybe they can adopt Max. Yes I know I am a romantic. I would love a happy ending. I am so loving this story. One of your best.
Marguerite
Date: 07/25/11 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 11: No More Families
Nick was very right. Family is whoever loves you and wants the best for you and Nick is Max's family. So is Mimi. Excellent work as always. Keep it up.
Marguerite
Date: 07/25/11 07:50 am Title: Chapter 10: The Polaroid's Secret
Oh thank you so much for posting this. I have been waiting for it. Nick really seems to be getting to Max. I think the shared experience helps him understand him more. I can't wait to read more. Excellent work.
Marguerite
Date: 01/10/11 04:40 am Title: Chapter 9: Important Lessons
You have created some great characters here and there have been soem great moments, very sweet. I love Nick and I like that you showed a little of his past to flesh out his character some more. I am interested to see where the story is going now. What will happen to Max and Nick? It's funny, I don't normally read original fics on AC but you've sucked me in with this one and I find myself more excited about updates on this story than some of the fan fics.
Date: 01/07/11 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 9: Important Lessons
Yeah death would be too good for Max's dad and Nick's. I will never understand how anyone can cause a child that much pain & think they deserve it. Makes me truly believe in evil. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Date: 01/07/11 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 8: Explorer Max
This made me smile. As damaged as Nick was he turned into a wonderful man able to extend compassion to a damaged little boy who will hopefully turn out as wonderful as he did. This is even better that "As it turns out". PLease keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 01/07/11 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 7: The Boy Who Was
You really have a way with words and making us cry. keep up the amazing work!
Date: 01/07/11 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 7: The Boy Who Was
Aw shit you like making us cry. Please tell me Nick's father burns in hell with a HUGE pineapple shoved up his ass. NO ONE has the right to do that to another human being let alone a defenseless child. DID I mention I want him to burn in Hell? Just checking. Lady you really have a way with words. I still think you should publish this. I know I would buy several copies. Keep up the amazing work.
MArguerite
Date: 01/06/11 04:41 am Title: Chapter 6: The Fine Art of Imagination
Just caught up on the story! You snuck two more chapters in. I want MORE. You better not stop until you finish this one deary, otherwise I might have to hunt you down! :)
