[Report This]Date: 12/23/04 05:47 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
Great imagination! Very interesting story! Where did you come up with using the name Adonica though? I haven't ever met anyone who has even heard of my name before! Just wondering! Again, I like your writing!
[Report This]Date: 01/12/04 04:37 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
GREAT JOB WITH THIS CHAPTER
[Report This]Date: 01/12/04 04:31 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
great job not what i expected:( BUT IT WAS GREAT
[Report This]Date: 01/11/04 06:21 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
Alaura definitely has some time ahead of her. She'll definitely have conflicts waiting as the months go along. Then, I see Rich and Adonica all lovey-dovey... Dude, I don't know whether to press the issue with Kevin. But here I am acting like I personally know the characters. Heh, oh well. Good job.
[Report This]Date: 01/11/04 03:46 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
NO NO NO NO NO ADNOICA IS NOT GOING TO GET MARRIED TO RICH please he is such a prick!!!!! Adonica needs to be with Kev!!!! oh and Brad is such a dufus, (hehehe i heard that word today and i just had to use it) and Alaura is gonna stay with AJ..... Thats great, personally i hope they fall for eachother - its not like i don't like Devon, i just like AJ better.... Great chapter i can't wait to see what happens next... :)
[Report This]Date: 01/11/04 01:10 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
OK rICH NEEDS TO BE SHOT FOR ALL The horrible things he said to adonica!!! i hope this means she will go to Kevin!!! awesome chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: 01/11/04 01:09 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
Aww Kevin was so sweet with the song!! Adonucad should go with him!!! I am happy that Devin took it well!!! great cahpter!!!
[Report This]Date: 01/11/04 01:07 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
WOW i CAN'T BElieve that she is pregnant!!! AJ is such a sweetie for supporting her! I hope that Devin dosn't tatally lose it! AJ and Alaura need to get together!!! great job!
[Report This]Date: 01/11/04 01:05 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
rICH wants again was an ass!!! hope she goes with Kevin!!! great chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: 01/11/04 01:04 am Title: Chapter Twelve
OK that kid did not need to be so rude!!! Nick and Kevin were beiong nice!!! second Rich was an as hole to Kevin!! poor Kevin is haveing such a bad day!!! great job!
[Report This]Date: 01/11/04 01:02 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Kevin is not going to like this very much!!! awesome chapter!
[Report This]Date: 01/11/04 01:01 am Title: Chapter Ten
aww tahts so sweet!!!! i hope that Adonica says yes!!! but than again I also want her with Kevin! graet job!
[Report This]Date: 01/11/04 01:00 am Title: Chapter Nine
WOW i CAN'T BELIEVE that Alaura is chaeting on Devin! oh well he deserves it after the way he traeded her and AJ is a excelent choice! great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 01/11/04 12:58 am Title: Chapter Eight
THAT was so great!!! I am glad the boys were ok!!!!
[Report This]Date: 01/11/04 12:57 am Title: Chapter Seven
OH MY GOD i HOPE THAT everyone on the ride is ok!!!!! great chapter!
