[Report This]Date: 11/30/03 04:50 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
wow that was really powerful great job
[Report This]Date: 11/26/03 07:24 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
How did Devin turn out to be such a...nice guy? Dude, I would have had some pretty awful things to spout if I... Well, I've had a different take on that kind of experience first hand. Anyway, Richie is an ass... Kevin's trying too hard... And Alaura and Devin are happy - figures that's how everything turns out!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing...unsure if Devin will stay nice or not...lol...I dont know how realistic it is...I dont know...from my experience, when a b/f cheated on me, I was hurt, but no hard feelings (heck, I am still friends with 1 of them! ) lol..anyways, I'm a little stuck on the next chapter, but I will try to have it up tonight! Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 11/26/03 06:20 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
great job so sad that she is pg though
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I posted 15 a few hours after 14. There are some surprises (?) I guess you could say, in 15, that even my best friened was shocked over. lol. Might have 16 up tonight. I have nothing to do after my class, since Thanksgiving break is here, so I have a lot of time to get it done! (I love college and only having 1 class a day on Wednesdays!(hehe)) Anywyas, thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 11/24/03 02:29 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
great job with the chapter
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing again. More chapters coming really soon! I'm glad that you liked 13!
[Report This]Date: 11/23/03 10:21 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Dulcia is a real riot. Always peppy and ready to run - true dancer attitude! But, then, despite the hilariousness of Devin and Dulcia - Kevin and Adonica are pitiful. Poor people. Of course, Adonica is having second thoughts. Go figure... Rich is going to loose her - no doubt. Anyway, great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for another review! Can't tell you how happy I am when I see that I have new ones! I just posted chapter 14 and have about 2 pages done of 15...still working on it...hopefully will be up tonight too (11*25*03) I have a break coming up, so I am hoping to get quite a few chapters up during my time off! Thanks again! :o)
[Report This]Date: 11/22/03 02:38 am Title: Chapter Twelve
damn that kid sucked and poor kevin i cried for him how sad!
Author's Response: I'm sorry for making it sad! lol. I felt bad for Kevin as I wrote it. Its weird, cuz when I write this, I feel like I actually know the guys! (lol)
[Report This]Date: 11/21/03 02:25 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Poor Kevin - that had to hurt physically along with mentally. Youchies. And, Rich is still an ass. And, Keith...damn... I think I might have jumped that kid, even if I am studying to be a nurse.
Author's Response: lol! From this story, I bet ya can't tell that Kevin is my favortie BSB. (he is though!!!) Might have 13 out tomorrow night...just got home from work and its 11 pm (been out since 7 thismorning) Thanks again for reviewing!!!
[Report This]Date: 11/20/03 01:37 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Great chapter sad for kevin though good job update soon again!
Author's Response: Thanks again for another review! Working on 12 right now. Might get Kevin's reaction in this next chapter...depends on how it fits in.
[Report This]Date: 11/20/03 12:32 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Am I the only one thinking that Rich might actually be a bad choice? I mean, Devin's a bad choice - AJ would definitely beat that boy... Hmmm. Good chapter. You really got a knack at getting them out A.S.A.P.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yeah..Devin and Rich are both becoming big jerks! lol...guess I'm doing a decent job at getting that across! Need to find a way to fit Brad into one of the near chapters though...its beginning to seem like he's dropped off the face of the earth! lol. Trying to get 12 out soon!
[Report This]Date: 11/19/03 02:50 am Title: Chapter Ten
Uh-oh, Rich and Adonica are cute, but Kevin's got some rocky feelings in on that crap. Some shit is going to hit the fan, no doubt about that! But then Alaura and AJ... Now that was interesting. Devin will find out, because the jealous boyfriends always find out... And let's face that little predicament... Alaura LIKES AJ. Duh. Good chap, can't wait for another.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing...starting in chapter 12 or so, things are going to start getting interesting. Anyways, thanks again! I always love hearing feedback!
[Report This]Date: 11/17/03 03:55 am Title: Chapter Ten
hey great chatper but how dare you leaving me haning like that!!!!!! i want her answer need her answer i need more more more! ok ill calm down now:D
Author's Response: lol...I'm working on the next chapter right now (as I also write an essay for an english class (lol)) Lets put it this way...the next chapter (12 at the latest) should be quite...interesting. Sorry to leave ya hanging. The next chapter should be up by Tuesday night. at the latest!
[Report This]Date: 11/15/03 09:34 pm Title: Chapter Nine
im glad she did what she did her boyfriend was being an asshole. i cried though this was so sad
Author's Response: Im sorry!!! I didnt mean to make people cry! lol. I'm glad that you're liking it though. Chapter 10 should be up really soon...if not in the next half hour, then tonight. I'll finish up when I get home from work!
[Report This]Date: 11/15/03 09:01 pm Title: Chapter Five
I loved this chapter it was so sad i cried but i can see were kevin is coming from i would be pissed too
[Report This]Date: 11/15/03 08:18 pm Title: Chapter One
Great job. I just started this story but i really like it keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad that you like it so far. I am working on chapter 10 as of now..hopefully, I will have it up today before I leave for work...if not, it will be up soon!
[Report This]Date: 11/14/03 09:58 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Ouch! Alaura has got some serious explaining to do. Woah. Figures that she'd hook up with AJ. But Mr. Wonderful LFO is idiotic. Now if Adonica would only get the idea!
Author's Response: lol...beleive me, I have plans for this all the way thru to the end. I think most of it will come as a surprise...lets just put it that way! Thanks for reviewing again! :o)
