Date: 02/13/11 05:50 pm Title: Chapter Three
Oh so Nick has the wisdom good. Someone needs to tell AJ to pull his head out of his ass. I can see being hurt but get over it. He is going to be a father he should set a good example. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 02/12/11 08:28 pm Title: Chapter Three
great update, it feels like you give us insight in his life. you sure you're not AJ himself?? LOL
Date: 02/12/11 06:52 pm Title: Chapter Three
Wow. Who knew CArter could be deep-lol.
UPDATE!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 02/12/11 06:07 pm Title: Chapter Three
Aw, AJ and Rochelle are having a boy! :) I have to agree with Nick, AJ could be missing a great opportunity. He has to take the chance to make things right with Bob, no one says that it's going to be easy. He's got to at least try. Great update.
Date: 02/12/11 05:55 pm Title: Chapter Three
This intrigued me, and I'm glad I started writing! This is all very hard for AJ, and you do a really great job of showing that he's trying to be strong, but it's all so confusing and tough for him to deal with. I really liked the last scene here with Nick and AJ. The way you write them is very real, and I could see them having an actual conversation like this in that type of situation. Great job!! I love your writing, Pengi!
Date: 02/12/11 05:50 pm Title: Chapter Three
Poor A.J., he is really sad :( But he and Rochelle are going to have a beautiful baby! Can't wait for more!
