Date: 02/15/11 01:26 am Title: Chapter Four
I'm glad Alex is giving his father a chance. Update soon :)
Date: 02/14/11 07:42 pm Title: Chapter Four
Loving this story so far :) You do a great job getting into his head. Really liked the part about the knee surgeries and about how half the world knew about them but he didn't. Good point. Moving on to next chap...
Date: 02/13/11 08:28 pm Title: Chapter Four
Oye vey in a half shell. Carter's got a big mouth.
UPDATE!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 02/13/11 07:11 pm Title: Chapter Four
I'm glad Howie talked with AJ and that Rochelle convinced him to give Bob a second chance. He's got nothing to lose. Great update.
Date: 02/13/11 06:10 pm Title: Chapter Four
"Brian’s eyes had that good Christianly glaze to them, like he was revving up the inner concordance to start spewing out applicable Bible verses at rapid fire." *gigglesnorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrt* This is deff in my top 3 lines you have ever written!
Ro is right tho...he will spend the rest of his life with the "what ifs". But I'm torn in this situation, having being in one sort of similar. I really don't know what I'd do.
Date: 02/13/11 05:57 pm Title: Chapter Four
Oh that must have hurt to go there but I'm glad he did. It will help them both heal. Keep up the amazing work.
Marguerite
Date: 02/13/11 03:26 pm Title: Chapter Four
Wow. I was surprised AJ went back again...but I can understand where the guys were coming from with everything. Still loving this so far!
