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Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/12 04:46 am Title: Chapter 14

I'm glad they finally found some shelter, along with food and warm clothes! The radio message intrigued me; I'm glad they took the advice and shut the lights off, though I wonder if it's too late. I'm guessing they'll try to go to this Delilah's place if they can find it; I'm curious to see what's waiting for them there. I can't imagine how scared they must be, knowing they're in danger, but not knowing why or from whom. It'd be hard to sleep with all those questions running through your head! Great job with all the details that make this so frightening, yet interesting!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliments, Julie! Hearing frightening, creepy, goosebumps and interesting are the reactions i'm looking for. As long as it doesn't turn into sucky, horrible and is it almost over? lmao That wouldn't be good! Thanks for the reviews!!

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/12 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 14

I wonder if those people from the radio are Charles and whoever they run into first before that we learned about earlier. This story is so good, I shouldn't have read it, lol, makes me doubt my own writing. Eeek can't wait to continue.



Author's Response:

Aww thanks so much, Lore. Don't doubt your writing. You are much better at this genre than I could ever hope to be.

Reviewer: starbeamz2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/11 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 14

So instead of leaving a review per chapter, I thought i'd leave one big one...although, if you'd like, I could go back and review every single one separately ;)

I don't know how you do it, because I've tried a million times, but you always manage to create the perfect, creepy atmosphere in all of your stories. I don't know what words you use or what magic dust you sprinkle, but reading each chapter made me feel dread, nervousness, and...awe of the world you created. I am so curious as to how the weather changed in less than an hour from May to December; I want to know why Canada suddenly attacked the US (although I'm sure Julilly could give us a bunch of reasons for that lol); and I really want to know why celebrities are being hunted down and killed. I mean, I've often felt murderous when it comes to the Kardashians and Paris Hilton and most reality stars, as well as Jennifer Love Hewitt lol, but to offer rewards for celebrities? And, oh, how did whoever it is that is attacking manage to change the world from loving celebs, like the screaming fans in the hotel lobby, to hunting them down within hours? Oh and why do Howie and Nick need to look older? Is there some sort of hunt going on for youth?

Mare! Why do I have more questions than answers?! Y U NO WRITE FASTER?! Between this story and Undead, I have so many questions and need more chapters ASAP. I think that must be a sign of some excellent writing :)

P.S. I think Diddy was Puff Daddy and not P.Diddy yet in 1999 lol That man. Too many name changes :/

P.P.S. I love how part of your personal opinions of people like Leighanne manage to eke into your stories. It's especially evident in Nick's chapters :P

P.P.P.S. (<--Is that even the right thing? Should it be PPSS? lol) I may have more things to say so I may be back :)



Author's Response:

Thanks Sarah! One long review is fine. LOL YEah, here's a lot of unanswered questions but as we go along, more stuff will be revealed. You know how I work by now. I'm already working on the next chapter so hopefully i'll get another update out pretty soon. LMAO about Puffy piddy fluffenstuff. I forgot he was puff daddy. I'm sure he'll get over it. Leighanne is a douche, not a personal opinion but fact! :OP I thikn it is P.P.P.S, but I have no clue. Julie would know! I'm glad you're enjoying this and I never thought you were an asshole for not reading it!

Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/11 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 14

Woah....update....yeah!  Nick reminds me of someone shellshocked...his not talking is not really bothering me....it's his lack of animation.  I always visualize Nick in motion and his lethargy is unnerving.  And I thought nuclear attack, too, Nick.  But there are still homes and people around. So, I'm thinkng of some type of biological agent.

When I first "heard" the beeping, I thought it was going to be an SOS. :-)  Very clever way of sending messages.

You have me hooked on this story!

 



Author's Response:

I almost went with SOS at first but I didn't want to be that sterotypical. LOL I'm hoping to have another update before the weekend! Thanks Pammy!!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/11 10:58 am Title: Chapter 14

Wow, that was a quick update!  Funny you should mention the beep like a fire alarm with the battery running out as my fire alarm started doing that this morning, how weird is that!

Good thing they kept listening to the radio and heard that message.  Hopefully nothing will come and get them, and at least they know where to head to, if they can get that far.

Great chapter, can't wait for more :)



Author's Response:

I know! I can't believe I managed to update that quickly either lol whoa, that is weird! No one started talking out of it, did they? Thanks Steph!

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/11 08:08 am Title: Chapter 14

That was really quick! Nick you'll have to tell the guys and see if any damage was done to you eventually lol. Even if you don't look it's still there. :P. At least they found the RV. Cause otherwise he's right, they probably would've died.

Get the next chapter out just as quick :P

Author's Response:

I know! I'm pretty proud of myself. We'll see if I can keep it going lol Nick is stubbourn, that's one of the reasons we love him. Thanks again Rose!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/11 12:42 am Title: Chapter 14

I love how this reminds me of one of those movies on the Syfy channel. Its very creepy and realistic. I think something is really wrong with Nick and he's not telling them (does he ever) but I feel like it will get worse before it gets better. I am seriously enjoying this and can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

I hope you mean one of the better syfy movies and not sharktopus versus gatoroid lol Hopefully i'll have another update soon! Thanks for reading Tracy!