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Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/12 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 18

I read this chapter earlier on my Kindle, but typing on there is no fun, so here's my delayed review now that I'm back on my computer. I'm glad those guys turned out to be not-bad guys - and finally, we meet Charlie! I remember him being mentioned earlier and know something bad is going to happen to him, but for now, I'm glad he's here to help them out. Another piece of the puzzle! I like how you included the Numb3rs characters, though I never would have known that without the author's note; I never watched that show. Clever way to work them in without doing an actual crossover, though!

Author's Response:

Typing on the smaller things isn't fun! I'm on my desk top right now too! Thanks! Numb3rs was a great show and that's coming from someone who hates math! lmao I always wanted to have Nick part of the family but he would have been such an odd man out! Giving the words 'dumb blonde' new meaning! Thanks for the review, Julie! :O)

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/12 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 18

HA! that's where Chalie Epps was from!! I knew the namesounded familiar! LOL. 



Author's Response:

Yup! I am a huge Numb3rs fan and have always wanted to incorporate them into a story. I'm glad I finally was able to. Thanks, Lore!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/11 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 18

Really enjoyed it, it's good to see that the people outside the museum turned out to be friendly after all.  So they've somehow ended up a year in the future, this is intriguing and I'm looking forward to getting to the bottom of it.

Poor Nick, I hope no one recognises him!



Author's Response:

Nope about them being ahead by a year lol they actually touch on that in the next chapter. :O) thanks again Steph!

Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/11 10:15 am Title: Chapter 18

Okay....I've gotta know.....where are all the kids and teenagers?  And if this is an "alternate universe," where are the BSB of this universe?

And finally we get to meet Charlie.

Great job, Mare.  The more I learn, the more I want to know!

Pammy Whammy



Author's Response:

That shall be explained fairly soon :O) Thanks for reading Pammy! Hope you continue to enjoy this one!

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/11 01:58 am Title: Chapter 18

So now we meet the infamous Charlie who helps them out. I'd love to get some answers, and I can't wait to see the next chapter. Nick is always the one with issues, we're all so mean to him LOL.

Author's Response:

Yup, now Charlie is here to do some splainin' lol maybe? Not sure if Nick is next but he probably is, Poor Nick,

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/11 01:44 am Title: Chapter 18

Ohhh damn, people almost recognized Nick. At least they found some help for now. I love how you're jumping from the past to the future without explaining much, it is very suspenseful and creative. Really enjoying the story so far!

Author's Response:

Thank you Tracy! I'm really happy to hear you're liking it so far! :O)