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Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/12 03:06 am Title: Chapter 20

I forgot to say in my other review, I'm really glad the plane was still there when Kevin went back with Charlie and the gang. I hate in stories like this when the main character witnesses something strange and then tells everyone, and they don't believe him, and there's no evidence to prove his story. So it was nice that the plane was still there as proof and that Charlie seems to "get it." That's all! :)

Author's Response:

Thanks, I hate that too! It was really important for the plane to still be there so this way Charlie could finally let Kevin know what the heck was going on (And you guys too!) lol

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/12 02:51 am Title: Chapter 20

WHOA! First off, way to leave another mean cliffy! Secondly, I was floored by the newspaper photo. I guess it confirms what I was thinking, that they're in a different dimension or something, but it's still really weird to think that their parallel twins or whatever you wanna call them have already been killed (except Nick, apparently). I wonder what they're doing to the underage ones. Training them to be proud Canadians, like the Hitler youth? LOL Speaking of Canadians, I forgot to put this in a review, but it occurred to me the other day that the reason it's been snowing this whole time is because the enemy is from Canada! Is that right?? If so, that's hilarious LOL. Reading on to find out where Nick went... and I'm still curious to find out what Howie said to Don after the last chapter!

Author's Response:

lmao I give Canada no love in this one, eh? glad you like the snowing constantly but at least there is no sign of a moose anywhere! ;-)

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/12 04:32 am Title: Chapter 20

I really want to know what they are doing with the "kids" specially since I would've been one at this time... grr.  I like Charlie being in this, brings the science aspect of... kind of makes this story a bit sci fi then huh? :-D



Author's Response:

Yes, it is kind of sci fi-ish which is a very new thing for me and very hard. It's hard to try to sound like a brainiac when you are a moron! lol

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/20/11 07:42 am Title: Chapter 20

FINALLY catching up! (This is long overdue but my first morning class for tomorrow was cancelled, got the email a few hours ago. So ya know, I can sleep in lol). Finally, answers! Yay Charlie though LMAO at him being so excited about it. Poor Alternate Nick! :( And Nick always has a knack for going missing, I swear lol.

Author's Response: Holy waking up to a ton of reviews! lol I thought it was someone catching up, nice to see it's you! :O) Yes, they need to put some bells on the kid or something!

Reviewer: BSBfan4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/11 06:54 am Title: Chapter 20

This has really got me hooked, I can't stop reading.



Author's Response: wow, thank you so much. I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/11 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 20

Yay, some answers at last!  I knew they had to have either time travelled or maybe come from a parellel universe to end up where they were.  That was kind of freaky with the photos of them dead.  Good to see Charlie has some answers.  But what's happened to Nick?  Mean cliffy!!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks Steph! Yes, I know that was a mean one lol I'm hoping to write sometimes this week so you odn't have to wait too long for an answer. Thanks for the review. I am beginning to get a complex about this chapter.

Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/11 04:48 am Title: Chapter 20

"Star Troopers".......clever name.  And making Nick watch as his "brothers" were murdered....I guess the Geneva Convention is not in effect in this universe.

And what a cliffie!  Kevin's reaction was definitely unexpected.

Great update, Mare.

Pammy Whammy



Author's Response:

Glad you liked the "Star Troopers." I was afriad it was going to be  too corny. Yeah, I think it's safe to say that this is a very different place they landed themselves in. Thanks for reading, Pammy. I was starting to get sad no one had reviewed this yet. LOL