Date: 06/30/12 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 23
LOL This chapter was amusing; I love how you wrote AJ. It felt very AJ-like, and yet, I liked the explanation of how he was taking on some of his bastard doppleganger's traits because he didn't seem SO angry before - yet I think he's absolutely justified in feeling that way! Even what he said about Nick... I don't wholly disagree LOL. Just the whole way it was written was funny, and I think you set a record for number of F-bombs in a chapter! Congrats! =D LOL
Author's Response:
You had to see my writing this one. Everyone who knows me well would never believe this chapter came from me . I can't even bring myself to say that word. I literally call it the F word. LOL So there was some major AJ channeling going on. I agree about Nick too, i'm sure I would feel like that if I were AJ! Thanks, Julie!!
Date: 09/20/11 07:51 am Title: Chapter 23
LMFAO I love AJ, even when he's picking up asshole traits. And I love the whole alternate dimmension, picking up different traits from your other self sort of deal. Just adore it. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! AJ and his potty mouth, I think. lol
Date: 08/30/11 03:59 am Title: Chapter 23
Ok, I sincerely apologize for not reviewing...but I'm reading. I keep reading a chap here and a chap there. Great chapter! I didn't mean the cussing. It sounded very AJ like. This story is some crazy shit! I promise I'll actually review! Lol
Author's Response: Thanks Sel! It's always nice to hear from you! LOL about the crazy shit.
Date: 08/27/11 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 23
Great chapter Mare! I know there was a lot of swearing, but it was realistic and fitted the chapter. I'm curious about what the others were like in this alternate world.
I also never swear in real life, maybe the odd 'shit' here and there.
Author's Response:
LOL i'm the same way. A major wuss when it comes to cussing. Thanks, Steph. I'm working on the next chapter now actually lol I'm going to try to get an update up tonight before the hurricane hits!
Date: 08/25/11 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 23
I am so glad for the update! I think this AJ is very realistic. I see it as a culmination of all the fear and frustration he's feeling. Now, the idea that he has "gained" some of the traits of the AJ of this current universe is interesting. And I find myself asking some of the same questions as AJ: will the others "gain" traits from their counterparts? and what of Nick? is his "double" still alive? and if so, does this explain Nick's illness....two Nicks sharing the same plane of existence? (Can you tell I'm a sci-fi fan?!)
I am really loving this, Mare. It's so very different from anything you've written before!
Keep up the good work!
Pammy Whammy
Author's Response: I really have enjoyed writing AJ in this story. For some reason he's been the easiest to channel lol probably because of the alternate universe and alll lol I am really glad you're enjoying this and that maybe i'm doing sci-fi some justice. Thanks for reading Pammy!
Date: 08/25/11 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 23
Aww I feel like need to give Nick hug. There was a lot of AJ cussing lol, but its fine, I felt like that was really AJ talking, I'm really liking this, its really good, can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Poor AJ and his potty mouth lol
Date: 08/24/11 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 23
Well first of all it's AJ, so that's completely expected, and if I had been in the same circumstances I would have probably been talking the same way. lol It's an interesting twist that they would be taking on some of the characteristics that their AU deadselves had, but who knows what can happen when you fall through a rip in the universe. It would be interesting to know what all of them were like in the different world too, I hope that all comes out at some point.
I've also thought about the Nick thing that he might see himself there, or if the evil Canadians will recognize new Nick as someone they've already captured and taken god knows where. I hope we get another by the weekend, this middle week one was a surprise, Lovin' this story. Found myself going through Mizpah series the other day too. : )
Author's Response: Yeah seriously, who knows what to expect when you end up in an alternate universe? LOL I cringed whenever I eff'd in this so i'm glad that you guys thought it was okay.. Yay to AJ and his potty mouth.. I'm not sure when i'll get to update again. I might have some writing time tomorrow but if I don't fit it in i'm hoping for Saturday, after that we're out of luck for a few days.. :O( Thanks for reading, Sam!
Date: 08/24/11 08:40 am Title: Chapter 23
Um, not really, Mare. I didn't find the cussing too much... It was AJ talking so it's understandable. lol
Author's Response: LOL thanks Ritz! I didn't know you were reading this story. :O)
Date: 08/24/11 01:23 am Title: Chapter 23
I loved this chapter, it was like I was in AJ's head the whole time. The whole thing with the dopplegangers is a bit confusing but I love the idea. Every time I read this I am just in awe. Loving it so far and can't wait for another update!!!
Author's Response: Thanks Tracy! The dopppleganger part plays a very important role as we get further into it so hopefully it'll make more sense the more we delve into it. Glad you're enjoying it! :O)
