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Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/12 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 24

I like how you wrote this chapter, jumping between the present and the past parts. It wasn't too hard to follow; Howie's thoughts connected it together well. I like that Howie is behaving realistically in this situation... not being a hero, just being a normal person who's frozen with fear and doesn't know what to do. That's how I would be anyway LOL. I'm glad he did do something in the end by throwing the rock, and it was lucky that Don and Charlie showered up just in the nick of time, but I wonder what Howie saw that paralyzed him with fear again at the end.

Author's Response:

I am drawing major blanks on this chapter so I have to go back and read ir. Poor Howie is always being paralyzed in fear of some kind. If this was the wizard of Oz, he would completely be the Lion! LOL Thank you feo saying it wasn't confusing going back and forth though. You know how I feel about flashbacks and i'm glad it wrote it in such a way that it wasn't too horribly confusing. NOw I have to go read it! Thanks again, Julie!

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/12 05:07 am Title: Chapter 24

Yay Charlie and Don lived!!!  Is Matt the Matt from Jive? was that his name? LOL.  Your *flashbacks* are easy to read, the transitions were smooth and it was easy to discern the differenence.  It flows easily. :)



Author's Response:

Nope, Matt is not Matt from Jive. I am one of those 'bad fans' who don't really keep track of all the misc people in the BSB's lives. This is just a random, smart Matt. lol Glad you thin the flashbacks aren't confusing and flow. I am always paranoid about writing those, epecially in a story like this that can already be kind of confusing. lol

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/20/11 07:55 am Title: Chapter 24

It wasn't confusing, and for the record I'd hate you if you used the word flashback LOL. I really like the Howie chapters, something I didn't think I'd say, but Howie just tends to tell more in his POV lol.

Author's Response: *howie dancing* Go Howie....it's your birthday gonna party like it's your birthday...it's your chapters... Rose likes best... just don't say so this... is Howie do it! lol

Reviewer: Sam_noelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/11 08:09 am Title: Chapter 24

Grrr. I'm trying to figure out timing here and it's hard. I'm trying to figure out if when we last left Kevin, Brian, and AJ if they came upon Clara and Randy's AFTER this whole van escapade, or if they got there right before this. I'm hoping for right before so that they can have a grand old meeting soon!!!

Poor Nickolas too, not a good time at all. I don't know where the hell they think they're going to get a doctor from, but I hope they do. Yay, Charlie lives! lol This should be interesting. Thanks for the update amidst the hurricane too, that's dedication Mare! haha

Author's Response: This happened shortly before the guys got to the cabin :O) They will be reuniting soon, once we travel backwards one more time. This was dedication. Hopefully it'll also be the last time i'll have to update during a natural disaster lol Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/11 05:40 am Title: Chapter 24

I tend to always see Howie as more protective of Nick than Kevin.  It has been odd to see him so ambivalent in this story.  I get the "fight or flight" impulse; and it makes me wonder what I would do in his situation.

Our Nicky is really having a rough time in this universe!  I really hope the guys are reunited soon.

Once again, thanks for the update, Mare.

Pammy Whammy



Author's Response: In a lot of ways I think he's more protective of Nick as well. I think just when Kevin is he's ore blunt about it lol Thanks for the review Pammy! :O)

Reviewer: BSBfan4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/11 05:12 am Title: Chapter 24

Yay an update :) I hope Nick didn't get hurt more than he already is. Update soon.



Author's Response: Thanks for th review! :O)

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/11 01:19 am Title: Chapter 24

I'm sitting here reading this during the hurricane...lol. wow that was intense. I have a feeling Nick won't stay hidden for long, he is easily recognized and I am sure that will come into play at some point. This is a very interesting story, I love it :) hope you stay safe too, Mare!

Author's Response: Thanks, Tracy. We'll see what happens. He is pretty recognizable but maybe not in this place. We'll just have to wait and see. Hope you still have your power!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/11 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 24

Wasn't confusing at all. My first car was a blue Ford Escort! Hope you stay safe and the hurricane doesn't cause too much disruption

Author's Response: Thanks Steph! Mine was a red Ford Escort! lol