Date: 07/04/12 12:53 am Title: Chapter 27
LMAO at the title of this chapter! =D Poor Nick... no wonder he's confused, if he's sharing memories with his doppleganger. Very Harry Potter and Voldemort; I love it! Neither one can live while the other survives. I felt so bad for Nick when he realized their theory of having to kill the other Nick or he'll die. At least they have some idea of where to go in New York to find the other Nick. Reading on!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I couldn't really think of any other way to get the guys heading in the right direction other than the whole sharing memories thing lol I was afraid it would be too over the top cheesy but hey, if JK Rowling can do it, why not? lol I'm glad you liked the title. I had some fun with the chapter titles in this one, paying homage to what was going on as I was writing it.
Date: 01/21/12 05:29 am Title: Chapter 27
Crazy crazy ... but so creative!!!
Author's Response:
Why... thank you! :O)
Date: 10/16/11 05:22 am Title: Chapter 27
LOL at the magic goat milk!! This is getting more and more interesting with each chap :)
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for reading, Sel! :O) lol
Date: 09/20/11 08:05 am Title: Chapter 27
This is a neat chapter. Finally we're back to Nick. I really enjoyed the crossover memories, poor Nick, that's gotta be a confusing as heck nightmare. It came across well yet I could still follow what was going on. I'm all caught up! Yay!
Author's Response: YAY! Thanks for reading all that last night, Rose and not even being all confused. lol Glad to see you're still reading. :O)
Date: 09/19/11 11:40 am Title: Chapter 27
It's not looking too good for Nick at the moment, but at least he's able to help lead them to the other Nick. I like that he wants them to make his other self's death a good one, lol. Great chapter Mare, looking forward to more :)
Author's Response: Thanks Steph! Yup I can see Nick wanting an exciting death for himself. LOL
Date: 09/19/11 07:17 am Title: Chapter 27
Pelham Bay sounds like such a good name for a internment camp, or just an all around scary place to go. It has like a Shutter Island feel or something,. It's cool how he's having visions from the other Nick, because I was sitting there thinking about how on earth they were going to be able to find him, but now with Nick seeing the other's life, that's a pretty clever way of doing it. I like the way you wrote his disorientation in the beginning too, it was very realistic or made the reader feel like he did as well, which was great.
Thanks for the update Mare!
Author's Response: Pehlam Bay is actually a section of the Bronx in New York where I grew up but yes it does also kind of sound like a cool name for a camp which is why I chose it. LOL and thanks for the compliment concerning how to find the other Nick. I was having a hard time with that until the lightbulb went off in my head. Thanks Sam! :O)
Date: 09/18/11 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 27
Ooooooh my, leave it to Nick to come up with magic goat's milk! Lmao. I love how this chapter was serious, yet classic Nick humor and the banter between him and the two cousins shown through. Poor Nicky. And ooooh my, I just thought... it would suck ass if they found the "other Nick", and they got their actual Nick mixed up with the alternate universe Nick, and then my my... how would they know which NICK to kill?!? O__O That's a scary thought, and I hope you don't do that to us girl! LMAO!! But, I really wanted to pinch Nick's cheeks in this chapter, sucha cutie!! This was a great update Mare, I squealed with delight when I saw it as the first story under the recently updated, lol. Can't wait for the next chapter!! :)
Author's Response: Gotta love magic goat's milk. I really felt like I needed some humor in this chapter. It was originally going to be an AJ one that was dark but he can wait another chapter and Nick was the one that I could make light and funny. No worries, he's too weak to join the guys on their journey to kill the other Nick and besides, he'd probably be too worried about his head exploding! LOL thanks Reb! :O)
Date: 09/18/11 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 27
Great update, Mare. I think Nick handled the information quite well! And a shout out to Dr. Who....I didn't know you were a fan!
And why is it Kevin who has to kill Nick's doppleganger?
Pammy Whammy
Author's Response: I've actually never watched Dr. Who lol but it seems like something that might happen based on what people have told me about that show. Hrmm...not sure about Kevin. I think he, himself just assumes it has to be him. He's used to being the olne who has to save the day so we'll have to wait and see if that changes and how he might react to it. :O) Thanks Pammy!
Date: 09/18/11 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 27
I was so amused by the chapter title. I'm happy Nick is talking to them and just the way you write his thoughts made me laugh. I can totally see Nick asking them how they would kill him lol. I can't wait to read more and I hope they get to the other Nick soon :)
Author's Response: Thanks Tracy lol I thought people would get a kick out of the title. I figured i'd make this chapter a little lighter. :O)
