Date: 07/04/12 01:36 am Title: Chapter 31
The beginning of this chapter was so sad. I felt bad for Nick, trying to swim and climb ladders and run when he's on the verge of death, and it broke my heart when Kevin and Howie said their goodbyes and left. :( I love how you make my pulse race one second, as they're trying to figure out how to drag Nick to safely, and you make me crack up the next second with the fat jokes and the blurry Brian reference LOL. Again, love that comic relief! I'm glad they found Matt, but I'm anxious to find out how it's going with the other group.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Julie! I wanted to really show how exhausted Nick was and still try to add some humor as the two tiny ones were left to try to get him around lol I realized that another thing I tend to do in almost all my stories is include a blurry Brian somewhere lol I forgot about that!
Date: 10/24/11 10:31 am Title: Chapter 31
Freaking stupid "Fatal MySQL" made me lose my typed up review! >__< Damnit. Anywho, I think it went along the lines of this...
This was my favorite lines of this chapter:
“Do you expect me to carry his fat ass alone?”
I love how sensitive and caring AJ was. Yes, my eyes rolled.
Charlie and Larry helped this time, giving AJ a break since he was so fragile...
LMAO!! Freaking AJ!! Sucha asshole!! :P But man, poor Nicky!! I feel so bad for him! :( But I'm really glad things are starting to look up for them! :)
Author's Response:
I hate those stupid Fatal MySQL error messages. They have messed up many a thing on this site from time to time. Those were some of my favorite lines in this chapter too lol Thanks, Reb!
Date: 10/19/11 07:29 am Title: Chapter 31
LMAO awww poor Nick. Don't mean to laugh at him but the fat jokes were amusing. Hopefully he does feel better when the other Nick bites it. Maybe then this will all be worth it. :(
Author's Response: lol I felt like I needed to write something in there to lighten things up. Thanks, Rose!
Date: 10/16/11 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 31
Thank god they got out of that body filled water ok! I love the randomness of Nick wanting a monkey butler, lol. Great chapter Mare, looking forward to more :)
Author's Response: Gotta love monkey butlers. I think we'd all have one if they let us!! LOL thanks Steph!
Date: 10/16/11 06:33 am Title: Chapter 31
Finally all caught up! Damn...I was so disappointed to have the "next" link missing! can't wait to read another update :)
Author's Response: Yay! Thaanks Sel!! I'm glad at least someone else has read this lateest chapter. I'm having a review fail for this one for some reason lol :O)
Date: 10/16/11 12:08 am Title: Chapter 31
Lmao I love Nick's thoughts but I feel so bad for him. Cold water is not good when he's already ill. I had to laugh at Blurry Brian too making an appearance and AJ with the fat comments. Cut the tension nicely. Loved the update and can't wait to see what happens when they find Nick's doppleganger !
Author's Response: I found myself getting the shivers too just thinking about having to be in the cold water when you're that sick. It's alwaysnice to use AJ to cut the tension in a story. Thanks, Tracy!
