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Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/12 02:31 am Title: Chapter 33

WOW, that was intense!! They definitely just made it worse by talking to Nick. I didn't think Kevin would be able to kill him; I wouldn't have been able to. He's too similar to their Nick. But now they've doomed Nick to die. I'm glad Don and Alan got out okay; I didn't think they would.

Author's Response:

Yeah, I'm pretty sure I wouldn't be able to do it either. Once I saw him & realized it was Nick, I wouldn't be able to bring myself to do that! I almost killed Alan off but I like him too much lol he's cute! Judd Hirsch played Alan Epps on Numb3rs. Thanks for all the reviews tonight! It's always fun getting them and reliving this story. 

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/12 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 33

oh and I meant the Matt that got on the plane with them... lol ... read the story in one day and you notice similar names so I thought there was a connection there. LOL.



Author's Response:

oh lol I didn't even remember him. One thing I openly admit to is being HORRIBLE with names. I tend to forget what I name characters and sometimes call them something else or in this case use the same name twice. My memory sucks!

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/12 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 33

well you did say the kids were being rounded up and sent somewhere "safe" but that's the last I remember being said ...did I miss what was actually being done with them? or are they safe? HEH.  I knew they wouldn't kill him! EEK I hope they get out of there before Nick dies

And of course this story warrants this much attention, it grabbed me from the get go and I know once I get to 37 I'll be waiting impatiently for the end



Author's Response:

AH, well there will be a chapter in one of the alternative endings that really delves into what happens to the kids. Thanks, Lore!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/11 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 33

I knew they wouldn't be able to kill him, he's Nick, whether he's their Nick or other world Nick.  But I wonder what that means for the other Nick now?  Will he die?  If he does, will they take the other Nick home (that's if they get to go home)?

Hope your power is back to normal!

Great chapter Mare :)



Author's Response:

I know, Nick is Nick. How could they kill Nick? My power is finally back to normal, thanks for asking Steph! :O)

Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/11 08:49 am Title: Chapter 33

I am so glad they couldn't kill the other Nick.  And for his father to be a Judas....that was a surprise.  One would think his mother would betray them!  Now, what's going to happen to Kevin's Nick?

Great update, Mare.

Pammy Whammy



Author's Response:

Sadly, I could see his father doing that as much as his mother. Aww to Kevin's Nick lol THanks Pammy :O)

Reviewer: KimberlyCan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/11 02:49 am Title: Chapter 33

I figured that Kevin wouldn`t be able to kill the `other Nick`.  That he and Howie would see their own Nick in him.  But letting him runaway.  Interesting I wonder what it mean for their own Nick now.

Can`t wait for another chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks Kimberly, hopefully you won't have to wait too long for your answer!

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/11 01:55 am Title: Chapter 33

Wow...that was really sad and powerful. I can't imagine being Nick, not having a clue what's going on. And certainly can't imagine being Kevin. What a conundrum! Wonder what they'll do now.

Author's Response:

Aww I know! poor Nick. :O( Thanks, Sel!

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/11 01:35 am Title: Chapter 33

OMG poor "other Nick", he comes to see the two he's always loved like brothers only to see them try to kill him. I sorta knew you wouldn't kill him, but still! Awesome chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks, Rose! lol

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/11 01:30 am Title: Chapter 33

My power is all wonky too. So sad about the other Nick's story....he begged to be killed and Kevin couldn't do it. I hope they figure out something soon before the real Nick gets worse! Great chapter and I can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response:

My power went out shortly after I posted this chapter lol Thanks, Tracy! Hopefully you won't lose power!!