Another really sad chapter... I felt so bad for Brian when he finally broke down, and the way he was talking to dead Nick broke my heart. You did a great job showing how conflicted he was over interacting with the other Nick. It was really cool of other Nick to volunteer to carry Nick's body for them. I think he's probably a good person, same as Nick, and I think the guys are starting to see that. I'm anxious to find out what will happen when they go to the site of this tear and if it will really work. I'm imagining them finding themselves in the Jurassic era, fleeing dinosaurs or something LOL (another South Park reference, sorry.)

Author's Response:

I thought of the fleeing dinosaurs thing too lol that would have been an amusing end. Thanks again for the compliments about the emotions in this chapter with Brian. what weird conflicted emotions he must have had. As far as Nick carrying Nick, I needed to figure put a way to have him go with the guys & that seemed the most logical way to get him there if anything can be called logical in this story lol thanks, Julie! 

Aww when Brian broke down in tears I felt so bad for him.  I also feel bad for Nick, especially when he was talking about his Brian.  He's doing a good thing in carrying the dead Nick and I hope they can forgive him.

Can't wait for the part B version :)

Awwww poor poor Brian :( I do like that they are giving the other Nick a chance and that they didn't shun him or try to kill him like AJ tried to do. I have a feeling AJ will eventually warm up to him. Great chapter, Mare. Looking forward to the rest :)

Author's Response:

Thanks, Tracy!