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Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/12 05:54 am Title: Chapter 41 (b)

This chapter turned out just how I thought it would! As soon as Alan died, I knew someone would need to take his place to set off the bombs. I figured it would be Nick because I knew something would keep him from going through the tear, since that obviously didn't work out so well in the other scenario LOL. I wasn't surprised when Kevin volunteered because that's such a Kevin thing to do, but I figured Nick would either step up at the end or just push Kevin through the tear at the last minute, Bruce Willis in Armageddon style. But even though I called what was going, I liked the idea of Kevin thinking he was going to die this whole chapter. It was very Deathly Hallows! Again with the HP references LOL, but that's really what it reminded me of, Harry's walk into the forest to sacrifice himself to Voldemort. It was really sad when Kevin found a way to say goodbye to each of the guys without revealing his plan. I loved the part when he said that it wasn't really Howie who was the most perceptive, it was Nick. Another part that really got me was when Kevin had told dead Nick that he would see him soon and to tell his dad he was coming... that about got me crying. :( Now onto the last chapter, for real! I can't believe I'm almost done with this story! I hope this ending is happier than the other one... I have faith in you! =P

Author's Response:

Aww, yes. This was my set up chapter for Nick to stay. Again, since everyone was reading both endings simultaneously, they didn't know this was the one Nick was staying behind but I needed to create a scenerio that had him not go with the guys and to really have them think Kevin was leaving. Since I so willingly killed off Nick once, I think people really went for the idea of Kevin dying so I loved the reactions when Nick stayed behind and Kevin let him lol Boy did I piss off a lot of people with the first ending! That was fun. And of course the second one will be happy! It's my last ending ever! lmao

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/12 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 41 (b)

I loved that you used kerfluffle.. I just want to let you know.  Aw I love how Kevin was going to make the sacrifice but I KNEW that Nick would be the one to take his place in the end.  It was very touching. 



Author's Response:

kerfuffle is one of my all time favorite words! lol I saw an opportunity and went for it! Yup, Nick has to die in this chapter. Glad you thought it was touching. :O) Thanks, Lore!

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/12 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 41 (b)

So glad you updated this! I love how Kevin tried to do the stupidly noble thing lol, but that the other Nick talked him out of it. Which is good, cause those Boys need Kevin. Great chapter as always Mare :)

Author's Response:

Thanks Rose! Thanks for sticking with me to the end! :O)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/12 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 41 (b)

Wow, I was on the edge of my seat reading this chapter Mare.  I felt the tears coming when Kevin said he was going to stay behind and when he was saying his goodbyes :(

Can't wait for more, I hope you manage to get it all written before you go back :)



Author's Response:

Aww thanks , Steph. I was beginning to get disheartened because no one had reviewed yet. Thanks for taking the time to review, makes me think i'm not finishing this just for myself. lol I am going to try to write one of the endings tomorrow. :O) We'll see how that goes.