Date: 07/10/11 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 12
You know, this story has turned really creepy! Just the kind of tale I love, because every chapter raises a questionmark. You're weaving a very complex and interesting story, and I'll be checking for updates ruthlessly. Keep up the wonderful work.
Author's Response:
Thanks Louise, glad to know you're reading this and also nice to see you back and writing again! I'm hoping to update this one a little more regularly :O)
Date: 07/10/11 08:44 am Title: Chapter 12
“Really, because they seem to want no part of us.” I wasn’t about to go out on some goose chase only to find ourselves smack in the middle of Deliverance or Misery.
I had to chuckle there because I'm with AJ.....ain't no way I would be following those people.
Again, Mare, you have done a great job of creating this ominous setting. Thanks for the update!
Pammy Whammy
Author's Response:
Thanks Pammy! :O)
Date: 07/10/11 01:47 am Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter Mare! It's hard to imagine it all happened during the flight and I can't wait to find out! Spooky with the dead birds, snow in May and people ready to kill. can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Thanks Steph, yeah I can only imagine what that would be like. To not now what the heck is going on.
Date: 07/10/11 12:42 am Title: Chapter 12
Wow scary stuff....Nick is gonna be traumatized After all of that. Great update!!
Author's Response:
Thanks Tracy! Yup he and all the others. LOL poor guys!
Date: 07/06/11 06:13 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this so far! I hope the boys reunite soon and please get back to what's happening with Kevin and Brian!
Author's Response:
aww thanks for reading! We'll be rejoining Kevin and Brian once we get a little caught up. :O)
Date: 07/06/11 02:33 am Title: Chapter 11
Sorry it took me so long to read this. You know I love this story, but I've been busy :(. Finally, we're where everything is WTF worthy and we can slowly learn just what the heck is going on. Somewhat anyway LOL.
Poor Nick, having seen that...you always make me say Poor Nick, I swear lmao. I love how they just crash into this apocalyptic world without a clue of what's going on.
“Maybe it’s some kind of psychic dream we’re all sharing.” Yeah, that does sound like AJ logic.
Love that line LOL. Update soon!
Author's Response:
That's okay, Rose. Sorry it took me so long to respond. LOL I know, I have a knack for getting people to feel sorry for Nick. I'm a Nick enabler! :O) Thanks!!
Date: 06/26/11 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 11
Scary! Reading about the cars being left on the road...I kept picturing the scene from the movie "The Stand." I'm glad they didn't find a body in any of the cars.
Thanks for the update, Mare!
Author's Response:
That's kind of what I was seeing in my head as well, minus the goo and all of the corpses. Thanks for the feedback Pam!
Date: 06/26/11 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 11
Great to see a new chapter and good to know more is coming soon :)
That was a close call, good thing they got the car going when they did!
Author's Response:
Thanks Steph! Sorry I didn't reply sooner. For some reason I can only respond from my desk top which I haven't been using at all lately. lol
Date: 06/26/11 03:04 am Title: Chapter 11
Omg this was scary!!! Poor confused boys. Loving the update
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading Tracy! Yup, the guys are pretty all Wtf? About things right now. LOL
Date: 06/09/11 04:22 am Title: Chapter 1
Hey Mare! Sorry I'm leaving this as a review but I can't send a message or post on the forum... which is basically my issue! It'll let me log-in, but if I click on anything, I'm returned to "guest" user. I was wondering if anyone else was having this issue or if you had any ideas? Thanks!
Author's Response: I posted on the forum to see if anyone else is having problems. I have been having problems posting on the actual site like leaving reviews and responding. I'm hoping you'll be able to see this. I was using IE but now am using AOL. It migyht be an IE issue.
Date: 05/24/11 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 10
So glad to see this updated!! I was waiting for this chap, and it was so good! Loved the fight with Leighanne and Brian...she was annoying me. Lol. You did a really good job with the "crash." that was really intense. And what a cliffie!!!
Author's Response:
Sorry it's taken me so long to respond. I have been having issues with the site and IE. I'm glad you're enjoying the story Sel. I'm hoping that after this week i'll have plenty of time to write again1
Date: 05/23/11 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 10
Arghh, that was a mean cliffy!!! But so happy to see an update for this story, so I forgive the mean cliffy, lol. Great chapter. I loved the description of them on that plane and was thinking about a plane ride I had like that (minus the crashing). I was on a little 8 seater thing over the Grand Canyon and don't mind admitting that I was terrified!
Wonder what brought the plane down and also what's going to happen next. Can't wait for more and hope real life settles down soon :)
Author's Response:
Date: 05/23/11 01:03 am Title: Chapter 10
YAY! I was hoping since I saw you pop into TDS, I would see you update on here too. I'm not in school anymore, but I hate the end of the year schedule. lol
Missed this story a ton, especially with all these romances everywhere. This is probably one of three reasons why I come on here anymore.
Ugh, these chapters are getting harder to get through only because I so badly want the action to start, but looks like that will happen from now on. Can't wait to see what the hell's going on! Thanks for the update Mare, and I know I didn't do it last time, but LOVED the last chapter. Made me really feel for them, esp. Nick wanting to go so Howie could stay...so sad.
Author's Response:
Sorry it's taken me so long to respond. I have been having an issue with IE and this site. I am done with school next Monday so hopefully i'll be able to write some more. I'm sorry i've been lacking onthe updates! Thanks for the support and the reviews!
Date: 05/22/11 04:57 am Title: Chapter 10
Leighanne seems awful clingy!
Talk about flying in a sardine.....yikes!I've flown in a small plane when it was raining and it felt like it was going to come apart. Very realistic, Mare.
Good update! You really have me on the edge of my seat!
Pammy Whammy
Author's Response:
Date: 05/22/11 03:02 am Title: Chapter 10
As much as I hate to say it leighanne is being a bitch in this chapter. Geez give Brian some space! I liked the description of the plane as well....the weird noises and stuff. Nick is already afraid of planes, I am sure this isn't helping. Can't wait for the next chapter, loving this story as I have said before :)
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