Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/11 01:26 am Title: Chapter 9

Happy Easter!

I wish I didn't feel like crying.  Nick's POV is heartbreaking. I love Howie's protectiveness....we tend to accept it automatically with Kevin; yet I am often surprise to see Howie's protectiveness of Nick. 

Okay....I can't really fault the older couple in wanting them to leave....but surely, they won't do it right now?  And who was Laura?  Does this mean that Nick was alone at one time?

Happy with the update....but, now I have more questions.

Author's Response:

I like to think that Howie is almost as protective of Nick as Kevin is. I gather that from some interviews I see of the two of them together, especially when he was younger. In my little ideal brain that's how it goes. You'll learn who Laura is once we start with real time, after this next chapter. Thanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed the update.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/11 03:36 am Title: Chapter 9

Poor Nick....I feel so bad...I can't imagine how hard going through something like that must be. Howie is really stepping into the big brother shoes right now, I'm glad Nick isn't alone. Amazing chapter, can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Thanks Tracy. Yup I felt the need for Howie to step it up in the big brother role. It's been hard not transporting Kevin there.

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/11 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 8

Yay! So excited to see this updated :) Cute chapter. I loved Nick and his "watch" and I love how Howie gave in at the end. Lol at him agreeing to whatever while he zoned out. Hope you update soon!

Author's Response:

LOL thanks Sel! Serves him right for zoning out in the first place!

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/11 03:03 am Title: Chapter 8

Awwww this was a cute chapter even if it was short. Howie's such a softie for Nick and I love it.

Don't let the funk get you down!

Author's Response:

Thanks Rose, yeah i'm trying not to let the funk get me down lol

Reviewer: Sam_noelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/11 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 8

I was worried about you. You were hot and heavy with this one for like three weeks, and then all of a sudden nothing for like ever! lol Seriously of all of your stories I think this one is the most excited I've been when waiting for updates.

However this chapter seemed like a lot of foreshadowing going on, and I don't know if I like that, I'm scurred. lol I hope to see you Wednesday, but if not, hopefully soon regardless. Thanks Mare!

Author's Response:

aww I know! After I moved I got into a reading and writing funk but hopefully i'm back. Not sure about an update on Wednesday but maybe by the end of the week. We shall see! Thanks Sam!! :O)

Reviewer: Karolina Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/11 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

wow, at length new chapter. It's short, but I liked it.

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/11 04:53 am Title: Chapter 7

Hey Meanie....oops....Mare, you  build up my hopes and then dash them!  At first, I had hoped it was AJ at the door...but no.  And then I thought yeah, reunite with Nick and Howie...but no.  But to aim a tank at the house and end it there....that's just mean!

I loved the Superman analogy.  As a comic fan, I'm more of a Batman girl!  However, I think Superman would make a wonderful character study. While wearing the cape, he's this powerful, confident, practically perfect super hero. But as Clark Kent, he's so very human with doubts and insecurities. Kevin is "Clark Kent" at the moment.  And it's understandable....it's a totally alien situation for him.  Great job of portraying him in this light.

Once again, Mare, you have me sitting on the edge of my seat.

Pammy Whammy

Author's Response:

Wow, thanks so much for that review. I am a Batman girl as well. I always had a crush on Robin though lol He is totally Clark Kent right now. It was kind of hard writing him like that. :O)