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Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/11 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 7

Phew! When they broke in, I was on the edge of my seat hoping that Kevin and Brian would be OK. Those men seem decent enough, so hopefully if they make it out of there, they will be safe with them. I hope they'll escape the tank in the basement.

Great chapter Mare, can't wait for more :)

Author's Response:

Thanks Steph! :O)

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/11 05:27 am Title: Chapter 7

Uh oh. Looks like trouble! Hopefully they get out of it! I'm so glad you're back to updating this again because I am really enjoying it! Great chapter Mare!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tracy! I just hope I can keep it up!

Reviewer: Sam_noelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/11 04:50 am Title: Chapter 7

I hate you so much right now. lol Just when I thought, OMG Clara and Randy, they're going to reconnect with Howie and Nick, you go and throw this wrench in the works. So mad... lol I'm just so happy to have some suspenseful stuff back on here, the last two weeks it's been nothing but romances. Missed this one, can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

LOL aww, well i'm glad to bring suspense back to AC. You didn't think I was going to make it that easy for them to just reconnect with the rest of the guys, did you? Thanks for the review Sam!

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/11 03:10 am Title: Chapter 7

OMG who are you and where did my Kevin go? No, really, it's weird seeing Kevin not be the confident one. Even though he has every reason NOT to be. I also liked the Superman analogy, I think it fits him really well. I just hope somehow the Boys are able to find each other. :(. Loved it as always Mare. :)

Author's Response:

I know, it was equally hard to write Kevin like that but I think in this kind of situation he would tend to act more his age and less like a super hero. I'm glad you liked the Superman analogy. I almost left it out. Thanks for the review Rose!

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/11 02:56 am Title: Chapter 6

Awww I love AJ lmao. Even cranky as hell hungover AJ. :). LMFAO at the Canadian toilets bit. That one had me cracking up.

Author's Response:

Thanks, I enjoyed the toilet but myself lol :O)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/11 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 6

Great chapter Mare! I was laughing to myself when AJ suddenly answered "toilet" and when they were going to play a prank of Kevin, but he warned them off. Love it :) Good luck with your move, hope it all goes smoothly.

Author's Response:

LOL oh Aj, he's so silly! And it's hard to get anything past Kevin! Thanks Steph!

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/11 03:51 am Title: Chapter 6

I LOVED this chap! So many funny moments. My favorite parts were when Nick spit on AJ, when Howie just yells out for coffee, and when AJ freaks out on Kevin. Funny stuff! The interview was especially interesting with AJ thinking about Canadian toliets. LOL.Love the irony with the whole Canada thing.

Good luck with the move! And can't wait to read another update from you!

Author's Response:

Thanks! LOL For some reason I cracked myself up when Howie yelled randomly as well. I can see him doing that! Coffee!! Thanks forreading Sel! I hope my move goes well too!

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/11 12:02 am Title: Chapter 6

All the guys were in such a bad mood! LOL, it was funny to read A.J. complain about everything. It was clever to put Canada in a nice place and then we all know who are behind this. Good luck with the moving and the band festival! Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! He does like to complain, doesn't he? lol Poor AJ!  Thanks for the good luck wishes, I will need them!

Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/11 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 6

Good luck with the band festival and the move.  Remember, don't leave a box on top of the car!  Ohhh....a champagne hangover, I feel your pain AJ.  I, personally, can't drink the stuff.  Usually after one glass, I have a headache.  The irony is rich here with what we know about the Canadien offensive.  Good update, Mare.  I'll be waiting, inpatiently, for the next update! LOL!

Pammy Whammy



Author's Response:

Thanks! Everything always seems to happen at once! I am not a big champagne person myself. Thanks for the review Pammy! Hopefully it won't take too long before i'm back. I know my computer will be hooked up by Monday so that's a good thing! :O)

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/11 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 6

LOL. Canadian toilets sounds like something Nick would say. And I have to agree what is it about Nick that makes girls all psycho? I love AJ's comment to Kevin, its perfect that he left him speechless. Kind of ironic that AJ thanks Canada for the support but later its Canada that's behind everything? Love the irony and the update! Hope your move goes well and can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response:

LOL yes it does. That's why I made AJ say it instead! Thanks for the review! Hopefully the move will go well too! Eep!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/11 10:55 am Title: Chapter 5

Loved it Mare! I can just imagine AJ moaning all the way, until he realises a sprain is nothing compared to what it could have been. Good thing the girl doesn't know who he is, she might trade him in for a reward otherwise. But I think as they get to know each other better, she might find out who he is and not want to hand him over.

Can't wait for more :)

Author's Response:

Thanks Steph! Yes, maybe this whole ordeal will help him not whine so much! :O)

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/11 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 5

Glad that he's ok! LOL at him being such a drama queen. That was creepy when she was talking about catching a celebrity. Good thing he didn't say anything at first. Poor thing, I'm sure he's so scared without any of the other guys! The Canada thing is funny...but what is zed? LOL.

Author's Response:

Zed is the way the Canadian's say the letter Z. lol I would be really scared too if I was AJ. Being all alone and not knowing if the others are alive. Thanks Sel! :O)

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/11 09:49 am Title: Chapter 5

Hmmm this girl is interesting. And as always we blame Canada. Damn those Canadians LOL jk ;) I love how you write AJ, he's such a drama queen. Can't wait for the next chapter Mare!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tracy! Yes, he is a little drama queen lol

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/11 09:34 am Title: Chapter 5

Interesting the fact about the canadians...

I'm so happy A.J. is alive! At least he found someone to be with. This girl seems nice, lol. I got a feeling they will have a lot of adventures haha. I'M LOVING THIS!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Yes, I could never kill any of them. It's my one weakness, so far at least lol Glad you're enjoying it and thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/11 03:57 am Title: Chapter 5

You hoser, that there was right some prejudice against Canadians, eh? Oh and zed, maple syrup, and we smoke a lot of weed hence the flag. :P I really enjoyed this chapter and getting some insight into what may have happened. Damn dirty Canucks! By the way look up the movie Canadian Bacon, one of my favs. Once you read a synopsis you will know why I suggested it lol

Author's Response:

LOL I will have to do that, thanks! I never associated the Canadians with weed, it does kind of explain some more things about the Canadians I went to college with though! Thanks Julilly!