Date: 01/30/12 09:07 am Title: Chapter 40 (b)
Soooo...I didn't think I'd like the "take the new Nick home" option, but I'm starting to think it's kind of endearing, but weird to think that all at the same time. Bottom line I'm liking that story line more than I thought I would.lol I think the other one is just going to be a wait to see how it all turns out kind of thing.
One thing I kind of need to clarify is that...is murderer Nick offering to carry Nick through to the other side, or just to the portal and then the guys will carry him? I assume the latter, but it sounded a little like he was going all the way. lol
Great job with the updating by the by, love it!
Author's Response:
Hey Sam! First of all thanks for not giving up on the story. I admit I was little afriad you had decided to stop reading it after I killed off Nick. Not that I can blame you, because honestly, i''m the same exact way lmao I'm glad you're warming up to the idea of the other Nick going home with them. Just remember it's me writing this, okay? lol sometimes you have to expect the unexpected. And yes, the other Nick volunteered to carry dead Nick although I can see him trying to sneak on through the tear unnoticed lol :O)
Date: 01/29/12 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 40 (b)
:( poor Brian again. And poor other Nick as well. I am glad they had this talk, and it just seemed like a conversation they would have had in real life as well. Great chapter, can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Tracy. I tried to keep it realistic and I could see them talking like that. :)
Date: 01/29/12 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 40 (b)
that was a very nice heart t oheart. I hope that all the guys will be able to forgive him and accept him when they get home.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Lore. Let's hope he's able to get them all to forgive him. :)
Date: 01/29/12 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 40 (a)
oh Nick is going to carry his own dead body, that is strange yet sweet at the same time.
Author's Response:
I know, that's kind of messed up lol poor Nick!
Date: 01/29/12 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 40 (a)
Aww when Brian broke down in tears I felt so bad for him. I also feel bad for Nick, especially when he was talking about his Brian. He's doing a good thing in carrying the dead Nick and I hope they can forgive him.
Can't wait for the part B version :)
Author's Response:
I know! I felt bad for him too. I actually got a little choked up lol Won't have to wait too long. I just posted part b. Happy Birthday! ;O)
Date: 01/29/12 03:58 am Title: Chapter 40 (a)
Awwww....poor Brian. It's like talking to the other Nick finally made him accept his Nick's death.
Hey, I actually thought about them crossing over into another universe!
Great update, Mare. I look forward to reading Part B.
Pammy Whammy
Author's Response:
Thanks, Pammy!
Date: 01/29/12 01:58 am Title: Chapter 40 (a)
Awwww poor poor Brian :( I do like that they are giving the other Nick a chance and that they didn't shun him or try to kill him like AJ tried to do. I have a feeling AJ will eventually warm up to him. Great chapter, Mare. Looking forward to the rest :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, Tracy!
Date: 01/28/12 01:01 am Title: Chapter 39 (b)
I like this, Mare. He's the same character but I'm getting two very different views of him. The Nick of Part A is so angry, but in survivalist mode....him or me. Whereas the Nick of Part B seems, to me, more frightened and running back to his comfort....his "big brothers."
The Canadiens using brainwashing to use kids as their fighting force is a brilliant idea, even if it is immoral.
AJ, going back and forth between anger and sympathy toward Nick is understandable.....I find myself doing the same thing. However, what surprised me was Brian and Kevin's reactions.
I'm will look forward to reading more.
Great job, Mare!
Author's Response:
Thanks again! This time it's Brisn who is angry and not quite as forgiving but Nick is softer. It's kind of fun writing two versions of the same thing lol
Date: 01/28/12 12:33 am Title: Chapter 39 (a)
I understand AJ's anger and this small part of me was saying "do it, AJ." But, I was really glad AJ did not kill the kid....after all, he is Nick. However, I don't know if I could be as caring as Howie.
On to part B, Mare.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Pammy. I thought it was important to show two sides of Nick. This one is probably how I'd react. Defensive yet scared to death. I could see AJ being that angry but I don't think he would ever actually kill him.
Date: 01/23/12 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 39 (b)
oooh molding the kids to fight their own friends and family! that is cruel! Canadian's are mean behind that nice person facade. They are faking it so they can attack us at the right moment!!! OOOOOH we should just stop it now and attack them first. lol. ;)
Author's Response:
Those Canadians aren't all sunshine & roses. I blame my sister for marrying I one! Thanks, Lore :)
Date: 01/23/12 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 39 (a)
Well don't kill him, take him with. Sure there will an ajustment but eventually things will be okay and you can record Black and Blue and Never Gone and more... leave without him and your career will be over too AJ. :p LOL. Love it, on to the next.
Author's Response:
Maybe? Or maybe things would be even worse lol one never knows although I cant see AJ actually killing anyone. Hehe
Date: 01/23/12 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 39 (b)
Yes, I like this version! Poor Nick, I feel so sorry for him. He had it really bad and suffered for a long time before giving in. He might not be their Nick, but he is Nick in every way, even down to the same whining.
Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
I thought it was important to let people see what this other Nick has been through and that there will be more victims if the city explodes lol thanks for reading both versions!
Date: 01/23/12 11:54 am Title: Chapter 39 (a)
I can understand AJ and Howie's reactions. He did kill their Nick, but he is still Nick. I don't think I could kill him either, he was only defending himself and would've ended up dead if he hadn't killed Nick. Plus their Nick was in a bad way and might've died anyway.
Loving that there are two paths to read Mare :)
Author's Response:
I don't think I could do it either. Like Nick said, if AJ was in his position he would have done the same thing. Thanks, Steph!
Date: 01/23/12 11:38 am Title: Chapter 38
They definitely need to get out of there now! I can just imagine the whole city being blown to pieces. Not good, but if it has to be done then so be it.
I wonder what AJ will do?
Author's Response:
Yes, I agree. They need to get out of there!
Date: 01/23/12 04:29 am Title: Chapter 39 (b)
Ooh. I love this as well. I liked hearing things from the other Nick and finding out what they did in the camps...what happened to the kids and all. Very good chapter. Looking forward to the rest, I'm glad you decided to post both of them!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed both of them. I'm glad it wasn't confusing.
