Date: 01/23/12 02:19 am Title: Chapter 39 (a)
Kind of surprised at AJ, but again...not that surprised he reacted the way he did. I mean, he did kill their Nick. He's angry and wants to avenge him. This is getting so good (not that it hasn't been) but I love it so much. Onto the next chapter :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, Tracy! I wanted to make AJ be the really angry one. I always felt like he is really protective of Nick. Curious what you'll think about the b chapter.
Date: 01/22/12 05:10 am Title: Chapter 38
"Even creepier was the fact that Brian was sleeping in the same room as the dead body of Nick. He said he knew Nick wouldn’t want to be left alone. He hated the dark so he decided to sleep on the floor next to him." - Okay, I'll admit that I did find this a little creepy, but incredibly sweet and sad.
Destroying the city.....I guess when hope seems to be lost, drastic measures must be taken.
I know that's the other Nick outside! And although AJ is angry, he will never be able to kill him just as Kevin was unable to do it.
Great update, Mare.
Pammy Whammy
Author's Response:
Thanks, Pammy. Yup, no surprise it's Nuck out there just now we'll get two versions of what will happen next.
Date: 01/22/12 02:49 am Title: Chapter 38
they have to take him, if they don't he will just die in the End Game and then it was pointless!! take the other Nick! Oh my gosh I can't wait to see how you bring it all together for the end. I can't wait!
Author's Response:
Maybe... But then again it might be a bad thing as well. One never knows...well except for me. I know but i'm not telling! lol thanks, Lore!
Date: 01/22/12 02:09 am Title: Chapter 38
Had to take a break at work because I was waiting for this chapter. I loved the idea of blowing up new york city and everything. Brian sleeping next to Nick's body made me sad, but I was thinking...if Charlie and them weren't meant for BSB's real world...would Nick's doppleganger survive? Wouldn't that cause something? Anyway, great update and can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Aww, I know. I was sad writing that part too lol and you may be right about bringing the other Nick with them. Hrmm not too late to change your vote lol thanks, Tracy!
Date: 01/21/12 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 37
well now I must wait impatiently like everyone else!! Oh I'd tell you to write faster but I know you will write as fast as you write and I will wait *bites nails waiting*
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all the feedback. You actually got me to open this story and start writing on it. I have about two pages done. Not much but it's a start. You rock for catching up on this all the way to 37. lol You are a much more patient reader then I am. :O)
Date: 01/21/12 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 36
Nick's not dead!!! get the OTHER NICK and take him HOME with you. He eventually will pick up the traits of YOUR Nick and it will be like he was never gone. It would explain Nick's behavior after this album released too....oooooooooooooooooooooooo
Author's Response:
So, I guess that's your vote then? lol Wouldn't that be nice to be able to just take a clone home and mold them into whatever you'd like them to be? I wiish we could really do that.
Date: 01/21/12 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 35
Nick stabbed Nick!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
*nods*
Date: 01/21/12 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 33
oh and I meant the Matt that got on the plane with them... lol ... read the story in one day and you notice similar names so I thought there was a connection there. LOL.
Author's Response:
oh lol I didn't even remember him. One thing I openly admit to is being HORRIBLE with names. I tend to forget what I name characters and sometimes call them something else or in this case use the same name twice. My memory sucks!
Date: 01/21/12 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 33
well you did say the kids were being rounded up and sent somewhere "safe" but that's the last I remember being said ...did I miss what was actually being done with them? or are they safe? HEH. I knew they wouldn't kill him! EEK I hope they get out of there before Nick dies
And of course this story warrants this much attention, it grabbed me from the get go and I know once I get to 37 I'll be waiting impatiently for the end
Author's Response:
AH, well there will be a chapter in one of the alternative endings that really delves into what happens to the kids. Thanks, Lore!
Date: 01/21/12 06:14 am Title: Chapter 32
OOH God how can they kill him to save theirs? sure they need to but ... damn!
Author's Response:
I know, that's quite a little dilemma, huh? I can't believe you have read this much of the story in the span of one or two days. I don't think this story is worth that kind of attention. Thanks so much! You are actually almost all caught up and maybe you can help in the vote for the end. LOL
Date: 01/21/12 05:29 am Title: Chapter 27
Crazy crazy ... but so creative!!!
Author's Response:
Why... thank you! :O)
Date: 01/21/12 05:24 am Title: Chapter 26
OOOOOH MMMMMM GGGGGG!! I kind of thought his sickness was connected to the fact he was still alive after the chapter with AJ and learning he was melding with traits of the other AJ but but but... wow!
Author's Response:
Yup, it's that crazy doppleganger affect. LOL if there really is one of those things.
Date: 01/21/12 05:14 am Title: Chapter 25
Man there are a lot of dead/missing/hiding people!!
Author's Response:
I guess we'll call them maheeple! lmao
Date: 01/21/12 05:07 am Title: Chapter 24
Yay Charlie and Don lived!!! Is Matt the Matt from Jive? was that his name? LOL. Your *flashbacks* are easy to read, the transitions were smooth and it was easy to discern the differenence. It flows easily. :)
Author's Response:
Nope, Matt is not Matt from Jive. I am one of those 'bad fans' who don't really keep track of all the misc people in the BSB's lives. This is just a random, smart Matt. lol Glad you thin the flashbacks aren't confusing and flow. I am always paranoid about writing those, epecially in a story like this that can already be kind of confusing. lol
Date: 01/21/12 04:32 am Title: Chapter 20
I really want to know what they are doing with the "kids" specially since I would've been one at this time... grr. I like Charlie being in this, brings the science aspect of... kind of makes this story a bit sci fi then huh? :-D
Author's Response:
Yes, it is kind of sci fi-ish which is a very new thing for me and very hard. It's hard to try to sound like a brainiac when you are a moron! lol
