Date: 05/02/11 02:36 am Title: Chapter 5
Roflmao. I bet Brian's been in love with Heather all along & never wanted to admit it - haha.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 05/02/11 02:09 am Title: Chapter 4
good for Brian...she's being such a bitch for no reason. Great job, ready for more!
Date: 05/02/11 01:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Whether Brian wants to be involved or not, he's already in over his head. Love it!
Date: 05/01/11 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ooh, I like Chris' character already... *sing-songs* CONFLICT! :p Can't wait for more.
Date: 05/01/11 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 4
Leighanne's jealous of Heather? Grow the fuck up woman, YOU'RE the one he fucking married!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 05/01/11 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 4
Brian and Heather, go home to Kentucky and get lucky :) I can support infidelity in the fiction world, in the real world I'm not a big fan :) and I think it will be snowing in hell the day Nick calls someone wifey..
Date: 05/01/11 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wow...this is great so far, you two. I'm totally drawn in by the plot and characters already. Excellent work.
Date: 05/01/11 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 4
oohh leighanne can see past brian ....that will be fun!
Date: 05/01/11 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
I think Brian's going to Kentucky and get himself a lil sumthin sumthin...:p
Date: 05/01/11 07:53 am Title: Chapter 3
woah leighanne is a biiiitchh.. and poor heather..dont be so naive.
Date: 05/01/11 07:41 am Title: Chapter 3
After reading all these storys about Nick where he is the most romantic man that trows around the "i love you's" and "lets get married", it's fun to read about player Nick, it's probobly wrong, but it's fun :) And bitchy Leighanne is fun too, poor Bri :) As for the Thor talk, my godson's name is Thor, so needless to say I jump over all the Thor talk on message boards, it's just to weird :)
Author's Response: LoL that will be the last 'Thor' mention you get from me this story. I usually don't beat it to death. And I'm finding pleasure in writing Nick so self-absorbed. :) - Jen
Date: 05/01/11 06:50 am Title: Chapter 3
Leighanne is a fucking Bitch!!! Can I smack her, please??? Pretty please?
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 05/01/11 06:35 am Title: Chapter 2
Oye vey in a half shell. Brian should not have called Heather first - lol.
~Lenni~
Date: 05/01/11 06:18 am Title: Chapter 1
Leighanne's a bitch & Nick's a jerk - they deserve one another.
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Gotta give Jen credit though... She is freaking AWESOME writing Nick whether he's a charmer or an ass!! ;) <3Pengi
Date: 05/01/11 04:56 am Title: Chapter 3
OK, Leighanne has GOT to go...what a bitch! grrr, not happy with her at all. Great chapter!
