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Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/13 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 9

just Ick ick and ICK to the tenth degreee!! ICK! lol I'll say it one more time! Ick!!!



Author's Response: Hmmm I wonder why you'd say THAT about this chapter ;) lmao

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/13 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 8

Oooh creepy scene with Lauren. I couldn't help but picture a 13 year old Nick instead of the grown up one. Love that he came back into the room with a cheesy grin and profeessing how he was no longer a virgin! LOL



Author's Response: Yeah I thought it would be funny so I put that line in. Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/13 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 7

Okay well this chapter makes a lot more sense now that I understand the ful context of what's going on lol Still loved it!



Author's Response: Thanks Mare :) glad you still like it

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/13 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 12

Aw I really enjoyed that Tracy, lots of funny parts in it too, like Nick sleeping with all their wives and being a complete man whore LOL.

I do love a happy ending :)



Author's Response: I loved writing the comedy parts, it lightened up the drama a lot. Glad you liked the story and thanks for checking it out!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/13 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 8

LOL at 'that's a lot of cats'



Author's Response: Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/13 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

Saw this on your 'getting to know you' survey and liked the look of it :) I love the film 13 Going On 30 and also Big.



Author's Response: Awe thanks Steph. Those two movies were a big inspiration for this story. Glad you gave it a try!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/13 11:48 am Title: Chapter 6

Aww poor Nick! So cute that he started balling on AJ! And lol @ the midget lady!



Author's Response: Yeah he is pretty adorable in this story LOL I call Jenn the midget lady cause compared to Nick she is one :p thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/13 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 5

Once again, poor confused Nick! I would be worried about him too if I were the guys. Looking forward to seeing why Kevin left.



Author's Response: Yeah I don't blame them either. Thanks for the review, sorry for replying late. Been a busy day!!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/13 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 4

Once again I loved all the emotions conveyed in this chapter. Poor Nick! His reaction to Lauren pulling down his pants was pretty priceless too! I'm glad the guys are starting to realize that something is not quite right with him! You should have included this story in the challenge, Tracy! I'm sure anyone who pickedit would have loved it!



Author's Response: I was going to but by the time I had time to post another story, it was too late. If we do things the same next time around I will definitely do that. So glad you're enjoying the story and this was a favorite scene of min to write, I had it in my mind before it was written lol.

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/13 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 3

I loved that one of the first things he did was look down his pants! LOL I loved this chapter. You did a great job setting up how confused Nick was by all of this and also loved the naked girl line and Brian's reaction to it!



Author's Response: Poor Nickolas lmao. This story is full of confusion for the poor kid....and of course naturally after seeing himself as a man he would check everything out LOL. Thanks.for.the review!!!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/13 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 2

I loved this line: "It is? I just realized that this song makes no sense. Shorty must live under a rock. She has no cable or radio....is Shorty Amish?" Nick asked as everyone laughed.

So true, young/older Nickolas...so true!

 

Great job making him seem young in his older body and smart thinking about taking the mirrors out of the rehearsal. And I love how everyone looked do different but Howie looked like Howie! That is SO true! The guy never ages! LOL



Author's Response: Howie has not changed, I swear!!! Thank you for the comments, I was trying to make him sound like a confused kid in an adult body and I am glad that came out well. Thanks so much Mare!!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/13 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

aw, okay I remember you mentioning this story and how it was going to be like 13 going on 30. Now I get why Nick was acting like a kid in the chapter you posted in that survey. I thought maybe he had hit his head or somerthing at first. I'm going to try to read this during the rest of the summer. Love how AJ tried to get Nick to smoke lol And you know I love me some over protective Kevin.



Author's Response: Yep I love overprotective Kevin too and this is one of those Kevin/Nick bonding type stories. You'll see why later but I wanted to capture what their relationship was like back in 1993 first before Nick's transition. Thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/13 10:41 am Title: Chapter 7

I love the combo of pissed off Kevin and innocent Nick. THis was a cute chapter and yes I might be randomly reviewing chapters you posted in your survey lol of course a lot of them I have already read, the FYO ones but some of the others if they are categories I am curious about I'll be clicking and reading. This seems intriging. I might have to check this one out at some point to see why Nick is acting like a kid!



Author's Response: That is my favorite combo and it makes me really happy this interests you. I wrote this for kicks and it was a fun concept, its short but I hope you enjoy it. Thanks for checking it out Mare!

Reviewer: foreverebel7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/11 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 12

awweeee...Nick is back :D i totally enjoyed the story..thumbs up :)



Author's Response: I enjoyed writing it, thank you for reading and the feedback!

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/11 10:59 am Title: Chapter 12

the end? aawh well it all ended all good. Pretty funny story! Is there a new story to come?

Author's Response: I am working on ideas, glad you enjoyed this story, check out my other ones if you like. Thanks for reading :)