Date: 07/30/14 01:07 am Title: Chapter 8
Impaled on tree branches with their insides hanging out and congealed blood pools-- gross. Awesome description, though. It's enough to give you the idea of the scene, but leaves a little to the imagination, too.
Author's Response: Yes, it is a bit gross isn't it!
Date: 06/02/13 01:49 am Title: Chapter 8
Poor howie and poor jordan
Author's Response:
Yes, I agree about that, they do suffer a bit!
Date: 09/19/11 12:00 am Title: Chapter 8
Wow, this chapter seriously made me gag! Yikes, I give credit to Nick for trying to free the remaining deceased boys and give them a proper burial, but if that were me, there is NO WAY I'd even go back to the fucking plane! Lol. And yay for Nick and AJ taking charge! Man, I feel so bad for Jordan. :(
Author's Response:
I know, poor Jordan, he must be devastated. I wouldn't go back to the plane either, I'd be running as far from it as possible, lol.
Date: 07/19/11 07:57 am Title: Chapter 8
Okay I love this chapter. I love the descriptions of the bodies of Jon, Joey, and Danny! It's vivid and horrific and realistic. Just the way it should be. I adored the bit about their insides hanging out and blood on the floor all around them. And Eduardo being all over the place in pieces? EPIC!
At least they tried to cover up Donnie. That was pretty sweet. And I actually feel bad for Jordan, he's probably got a concussion, and wakes up to find he's the only surviving NK. That can't be easy.
Once again, I am loving this story!
Author's Response:
I did write it with more detail originally but edited it because I wondered if I'd got a bit too much gore in it, lol. There will be more unpleasantness lined up for them though *evil laugh*
I know, I do feel sorry for Jordan. He's lost his brother and the rest of the band in one go. That must be awful :(
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07/19/11 07:56 am Title: Chapter 8
Ooh, jungle animals; I didn't even think of that, but that's a good point! I bet the predators will be attracted to the smell of blood... bwahaha!!! I loved your description of the New Kids impaled on stuff with their insides hanging out... hehe. I appreciate the gore. This is so different from anything I've seen you write; you've wowed me! Keep up the awesome work; I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading Julie, glad you are enjoying it so far. This is very different to what I usually write, although I did a bit of horror in the story Games. I must admit that I like writing this kind of thing, it's fun torturing the characters for a change.
Date: 07/19/11 05:07 am Title: Chapter 8
oh now I feel a bit sad for Jordan :(
Smart thinking to get out of the clothes.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I thought they should get out of them so they don't attract unwanted guests. Thanks for reading :)
Date: 07/18/11 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 8
Wow! That would have to be so hard. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
It would be terrible wouldn't it. Thanks for reading Rachel :)
Date: 07/18/11 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 8
Yuck! I am not a fan of the gory scenes, but I guess that's why I tend to stick to fluffy romances LOL I guess it's a good sign if you can gross me out! And yes Jordan and Jonathan are brothers. I used to be a New Kids fan back in the day when I was like 6 LOL
Author's Response:
My friend was a huge fan of them back in the day and said I had to pick a favourite, so even though I didn't like them, I chose Jonathan, lol. Sorry if I grossed you out with the gore, but glad it came across OK. After reading this it's probably hard to believe that I like fluffy romance too. Thanks for reading Mel :)
Date: 07/18/11 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 8
Yikes, glad I finished my lunch before reading this chapter lol I had no idea Jordan had a brother in the New Kids. I guess I never made the connection that 2 of them shared the same last name. Again great job with the descriptions and just thinking about wild animals sniffing out blood is a gruesome thought. I think you found your calling because you rock at the horror/gore scenes Steph! LOL Excellent job!
Author's Response:
I hope they are brothers or I'll look stupid, lol, I don't know much about any of them to be honest! It was a bit gory, this is toned down a bit to what I originally wrote. I must admit to liking writing horror, such a big step away from my romances! Thanks for reading and reviewing Mare :)
