Date: 08/03/14 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 10
I like your descriptions of "machete-ing" (yep, made that word up) their way through the jungle and the magnified sounds of the jungle at night. I could totally picture that!
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed that bit, rather them than me though! Ew all those spiders and creepy crawlies :(
Date: 09/19/11 12:16 am Title: Chapter 10
Howie has such high spirits, which is exactly what they need, considering the situation they're in, especially Howie! Night one down, how many more to go...
Author's Response:
He is in high spirits considering his situation, I always see him as the optimist.
Date: 07/31/11 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 10
They must be exhausted but if it were me, I wouldn't get much sleep in the jungle.
I have a feeling that those search parties won't be there as quick as they think....could take some while ;)
Author's Response:
Don't think I'd be able to sleep in the jungle either, I hardly slept in a tent in a field, lol. The search parties won't find them yet, that wouldn't be much fun :) Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/31/11 02:09 am Title: Chapter 10
Poor Jordan, he pretty much has no will to go on. Which I can't blame him. He just lost everyone, though he lucky to be alive. Hopefully nothing gets them while they're sleeping! I was happy to see this updated :)
Author's Response:
I might let them have a night of peace, lol. Thanks for reading Rose :)
Date: 07/31/11 12:29 am Title: Chapter 10
Yay, I was just wondering when you were going to update this again, but then I remembered you've been gone camping. Hopefully you got some inspiration while you were sleeping outside! LOL I hadn't thought much about the phone situation until now, but that was really smart of you to put them on a reality show, where they wouldn't be allowed phones. I wonder if they'll get attacked by any jungle critters at some point; they've sure been worrying about it enough. Maybe Jordan will get eaten by a leopard! *crosses fingers* LOL I'm still loving this story; hope the updates keep coming! :)
Author's Response:
Sleeping outdoors and hearing night creatures did give me a few ideas. Aww poor Jordan, I'm sure that head injury is going to give him a bit of trouble along the way, maybe getting eaten by a leopard would be too cruel, lol, but I have plenty of gore planned for them soon :) Thanks for reading Julie.
Date: 07/30/11 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 10
*cringes* Yes the bugs and snakes and other things. Yikes.
Sorry Nick, I don't think help is coming yet.
Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! I'd be crying like a baby if any of those jungle critters crawled over me in my sleep *shudders*
Date: 07/30/11 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 10
Did you use your camping adventure as inspiration for this chapter, Steph? Great job! I like how everyone seems to be stepping up to help out. The visual of Brian cutting down logs into firewood made me smile and poor Howie! He must be in so much pain! Thanks for the update! :O)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading Mare. The noises at night part was something I heard while camping, something ran over the top of my tent and I was laying there scared, lol. I quite like the image of Brian chopping logs too.
Date: 07/30/11 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 10
Good chapter. I would be scared sleeping in the jungle. I hope they get rescued but I'm sure it will be a while before it happens.
Author's Response:
I was scared enough sleeping in a tent for 2 nights with the night time noises, so there is no way I'd sleep in the jungle, lol. Thanks for reading Rachel :)
