Date: 08/18/11 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 15
they should have had some brains the night before and saved some of that boar for LATER! silly boys. Wonder what's up with Jordan, that vacant expression can't only be from his loss. Howie saying that the rainwater is okay to drink definitely sounds like some foreshadowing to me. Can't wai to see what you have in store next for the boys.
Author's Response:
I know exactly what's going on with Jordan, but we'll see how long it takes me to get to that part *evil laugh* I'm not sure whether to make the rain water drinkable or not, we'll see :) Thanks for the review Lore!
Date: 08/18/11 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 15
Stupid helicopter :P
Author's Response:
I know! So much for heat seeking equipment :( Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/13/11 08:48 am Title: Chapter 14
Wow, go AJ!! That's awesome they actually managed to hunt and kill a wild boar! That'll help the hunger situation. I love all the details you've included about them thinking about food and how much they stink LOL. Those are the things I would be obsessing over if I were in this situation. You're making it seem very realistic! Great job; can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I think I'd be obsessing over those things too. Glad you're still enjoying :)
Date: 08/13/11 08:44 am Title: Chapter 13
Ewww, giant jungle ants biting them?! *shudders* Creepy! And that was just a taster... I LOVE IT!!! =D
Author's Response:
There will be more creepy crawlies soon, lol
Date: 08/12/11 12:44 am Title: Chapter 14
I'm glad they were able to get some real food. I can just picture AJ going after the wild boar. :)
Author's Response:
I wanted to make him a bit tougher than in previous chapters. Thanks for reading Rachel :)
Date: 08/11/11 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 14
Aww this chapter made me very hungry! LOL at AJ being the oe to wrestle the wild boar. Nicely done, Steph! Im' sure they're happy you led them to the water as well. :O)
Author's Response:
Yeah, three days in the same clothes in the jungle heat would not be nice, lol! Thanks for reading Mare :)
Date: 08/11/11 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 14
oh yay! AJ participating! LOL. I wonder what will happen now, the luck can't last.
Author's Response:
He was so hungry, he wanted that wild pig, lol. No, the luck won't last long :) Thanks for reading Lore!
Date: 08/08/11 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 13
LOL at AJ being all over dramatic although not that I could talk. I had twevle cows today because there was a ginormous spider in my bedroom! I hope Howie gtes better soon. I'm worried about him. Glad to see this updated!! :O)
Author's Response:
LOL you should've seen me freaking out over a moth that landed on me last night! Thanks for reading and reviewing Mare :)
Date: 08/08/11 04:12 am Title: Chapter 13
Oh ouch, I wonder what it was that bit them and if it was poisonous, probably not so much if they were okay the next morning.
Author's Response:
I think they will be OK for now, the giant ant just stung them. Thanks for reading and reviewing Lore :)
Date: 08/06/11 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 12
Jungle nasties coming next? owh no....
Author's Response:
LOL! Yes, I think there will be some in the next chapter.
Date: 08/06/11 01:32 am Title: Chapter 12
ah that was great of him to go back for Brian! Indiana Carter! HA!
love how you added a rope bridge, every jungle must have a rope bridge.
Author's Response:
Yeah, wouldn't be the jungle without a rope bridge or two! Thanks for reading and reviewing Lore :)
Date: 08/05/11 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 12
aww Nick is such a hero in this one. LOL Poor AJ is always such a chicken! I don't think i'd have the courage to cross that rope bridge. I love how Nick walked over it again to help Brian. Excellent update, looking forwatrd to more.
Author's Response:
I have a hard time crossing the little rope bridge in the kids playground, lol! I do love hero Nick. Thanks for reading Mare :)
Date: 08/05/11 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 12
Ooh, that was really suspenseful, them crossing that rickety rope bridge! I kept waiting for it to snap LOL. Was hoping it would happen when Jordan went across, but no such luck. I liked Nick helping Brian across; that was cute, and his narration about it not being gay in that circumstance was funny. Great chapter, Steph!
Author's Response:
I was going to let Jordan drop, but have something better planned, lol. Thanks for reading Julie!
Date: 08/04/11 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 11
Poor guys! I can only imagine how hot is there in the jungle. I'm just glad its not me because I start whining when it reaches 80 here! LOL Great job! Can't wait to see what trouble they get themselves into next.
Author's Response:
LOL I start whining when it gets hot too! I couldn't handle living in a hot country at all. Thanks for reading Mare :)
Date: 08/04/11 07:14 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh god, it sounds miserable!! I don't do well being hot and sweaty and dirty, and I can't imagine being Howie and having to walk that far on an injured leg. I love how Howie was a random wealth of knowledge about plane crashes LOL. Still holding out for that leopard, but great update, Steph! =D
Author's Response:
There might be a leopard somewhere or maybe something worse, lol. Thanks for reading Julie :)
