Date: 07/30/14 01:07 am Title: Chapter 8
Impaled on tree branches with their insides hanging out and congealed blood pools-- gross. Awesome description, though. It's enough to give you the idea of the scene, but leaves a little to the imagination, too.
Author's Response: Yes, it is a bit gross isn't it!
Date: 07/22/14 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 7
Nice descriptive scene as they're trying to help Howie here. Is it bad that I can't help laughing at poor Nick who keeps "shitting his pants"?
Author's Response: Poor Howie. I think if I was in their situation I'd be shitting my pants too hehehe :)
Date: 07/22/14 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 6
I like that Nick seems to be coming into a hero role. You don't see that all too often- usually he gets written as the one who needs saving.
Author's Response: Yes, that's why I decided to make him more heroic in this story, he's always the one in trouble and in need of rescuing so it made a nice change.
Date: 07/22/14 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
I like that the pilot stayed relatively calm. I think that's somewhat realistic. Just like AJ clinging to Nick and Brian getting sick seem pretty realistic given the situation.
Author's Response: Yes, I suppose the pilot would have to try and stay calm in order to control the plane, but I'd be a mess if it was me! Sorry I took so long to respond, I've had to wrestle my laptop away from the kids as they are off school for the summer holidays and have claimed it.
Date: 07/16/14 01:56 am Title: Chapter 4
I have a feeling it's going to get very interesting in the jungle!
Author's Response: It will get interesting, at least I hope you think so :) Thanks for the reviews Emily!
Date: 07/16/14 01:53 am Title: Chapter 3
I love that Nick whispered "keep the Backstreet Pride alive" to AJ to get him to jump.
Author's Response: LOL yes, anything to get him to do it!
Date: 07/16/14 01:48 am Title: Chapter 2
Well, since you acknowledged in your chapter end notes that the action didn't quite start yet in this chapter, I'll comment a little on the writing. Your writing is very good. You have a good balance between description and dialogue, and the guys are getting characterized well Nick the most, of course, since he's the narrator. The only concrit I have is that there are a lot of run-on sentences-- where commas are used where periods should be. I can definitely look past that, since the writing is otherwise so good.
Author's Response: Thanks for the concrit, yes I guess I could've used less commas, but hope the sentences aren't overly long. Glad you can look past that :)
Date: 07/16/14 01:41 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm finally getting started! I have to say that I'm going to miss Kevin in this one. Otherwise, good setup. You give a lot of background in just one chapter, and I imagine you dive into the action pretty quickly. I guess i'll find out!
Author's Response: Yes, I wrote this before Kevin came back and so he's sadly missed out :( I hope you enjoy the story!
Date: 06/01/14 03:16 am Title: Chapter 1
I like the whole premise of this story; something new and different! I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it!
Author's Response: Thanks, I just hope you like where it goes :)
Date: 06/24/13 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 23
That was a very cool story,glad I picked yours to read
Author's Response:
Thanks, and I'm really glad you enjoyed reading it :)
Date: 06/24/13 03:37 am Title: Chapter 18
glad you didn't kill AJ ;) your doing a great job!
Author's Response:
LOL I think I killed enough people already, but he came close!
Date: 06/22/13 03:25 am Title: Chapter 16
Was it hard for you to write this part? lol
Author's Response:
LOL I had to see which chapter you were talking about. No, it wasn't hard to write, it was fun but also grossed me out a little, poor Jordan LOL.
Date: 06/17/13 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 13
ten more chapters to go. This story is awesome.
Author's Response:
Yay, you're nearly there! Glad you are enjoying it still :)
Date: 06/15/13 02:41 am Title: Chapter 11
I loving the story :)
sorry I have not checked in my power was out and just got it back so if I don't answer it went out again.
Author's Response:
Hi, that's OK, and I hope your power stays! I'm glad you're still enjoying this story :)
Date: 06/02/13 01:49 am Title: Chapter 8
Poor howie and poor jordan
Author's Response:
Yes, I agree about that, they do suffer a bit!
