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Reviewer: BSBfan4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/11 07:23 am Title: Chapter 5

lol update soon, loving it.

Reviewer: cowgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/11 06:37 am Title: Chapter 1

Go Brian!!!!! Nick really needed to hear that.

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/11 05:01 am Title: Chapter 4

You tell him Brian!!!! *pumps fists into the air & cheers* I feel liberated, thanks to Brian's little angry spiel. He said what I wanted to say - Lol.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~



Author's Response: Brian is a wise, wise man. (and good lookin' too!) - Jen

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/11 04:56 am Title: Chapter 3

Roflmao! I SO saw that happening!

~Lenni~

Reviewer: tiggerc128 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/11 12:37 am Title: Chapter 4

great job!  poor Danny.  Nick should know, payback's a bitch!  LOL  Love it!

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/11 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 4

GO BRIAN! Hahahahaha at that prank on Danny! :p

Reviewer: backstreetsbabyg Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/11 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 4

you two have done it again!!
i love this story just as much as the others though I think Nick would know how to handle kids better than your leading on...
please continue :)

Author's Response: The answer to Nick's cluelessness lies in the first paragraph of chapter three. He's good at PLAYING helpless :)

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/11 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 4

Awwww Nick is scared, but I am glad everyone is willing to help out. I also like the joke on Danny.

Reviewer: Penrod2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/11 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 4

aw. i'm loving this story!!! :)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/11 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 3

Lord this made me laugh so hard. Shame on Nick for not protecting himself. He should know better. I bet though he falls in love with the little guy and ends up wanting to keep him.
Marguerte

Reviewer: BSBfan4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/11 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 3

lol loving this, update soon.

Reviewer: steffilu84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/11 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 2

Okay the funniest thing to me in this chapter is that there is a Starbucks in Nashville a few blocks from music row where everyone records their music and one of my best friends works there, lol. Her name is not Britney but that still really cracked me up. Funny story so far ladies, lovin it.



Author's Response: LoL haha that's SO uncanny. While writing I just figured Starbucks would be easiest because there's like one on EVERY corner. Nice to know you confirmed my Starbucks location accuracy. :)

Reviewer: tiggerc128 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/11 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 3

LOL  I can see this in my mind and I love it!  great job!

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/11 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 3

LMAO at "plastic ass sack"!!!!!!! This is the best! Hahahahahaha! :D

Author's Response: Isn't it??? I almost choked reading that line, too. LOL Jen's brilliant with the Nickisms! <3Pengi

Reviewer: Just_Me Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/11 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 3

I think rough morning was an understatement! lol