Date: 07/16/11 01:25 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh this was classic. Exactly like how a baby acts. And I don't blame Ben. That concoction tasted nasty. I would have spit it out too. Nick really is falling in love with Ben. I so hope they get to stay together. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Date: 07/16/11 01:15 am Title: Chapter 10
Man she was way more forgiving than i would have been. But the purse whack was classic. He deserved it. And I cracked up when he called the swifter a midget. I feel sorry for him though. He loves Ben but has no idea how to be a father. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Date: 07/16/11 12:24 am Title: Chapter 13
This chapter is full of win. So many things make me laugh. But my favorite thing is Nick telling Ben "I know Carters are supposed to be hot but this is ridiculous" and "you have plenty of time to be hot" that was so cute. Great update girls!
Date: 07/15/11 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 13
Awww I remember the first time my son was sick it scares u cuz ur not sure what to do when it's ur first. Wonderful job.
Date: 07/15/11 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 13
"I know Carters are supposed to be hot, Benny, but this is ridiculous," - WIN.
Date: 07/15/11 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 12
great chapter! :)
Date: 07/15/11 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 12
I have got to give you both so much credit. The way you write, you truly feel like you are there watching th story unfold. Love it and can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks for the review! We've been having a lot of fun writing this one. :)
Date: 07/15/11 11:54 am Title: Chapter 12
I love this story so far I hope Nick change his mind and wants to keep his son. I think he quite attached to him. I hope he finds his mother and really talk of why she left Ben at Nick tour bus is that fact of her family or an abusive ex boyfriend that found out that she cheated on him and try to protect him. Oh the possibilities of how you write I'm really sitting on edge here pleased post some more update please .
Author's Response: Oh, you'll find out what happened to Ben's mama eventually for sure! Nick probably needs to see her again just to remember what she looked like, haha. that's so sad. :) - Jen
Date: 07/15/11 08:31 am Title: Chapter 12
Yay! update number 1 for the day....
that was so cute, I could actually picture Nick being so sweet to Ben. and I love it. :)
Author's Response: Just the thought of Nick being all dad-like makes me want to melt. :) - Jen
Date: 07/15/11 07:56 am Title: Chapter 12
Roflmao. Dear God, did Nick call that one or what?
And he'd BETTER keep Ben & be allowed to keep him, since he IS his son!!!!! They're cute together!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. Sometimes I forget Ben's not real too. Lol.
Author's Response: Haha the world revolves around Starbucks! And I daresay pointy sticks are gonna come out if Nick gives Benners up. LoL - Jen
Date: 07/15/11 07:53 am Title: Chapter 12
Hahaha cute. I hope nick keeps his son they are to cute together!
Date: 07/15/11 07:10 am Title: Chapter 12
Thanks for another chapter.
Date: 07/14/11 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 11
Haha this so so cute father son time lol.
Date: 07/14/11 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 11
Hahahahaha! This is too cute. :)
Date: 07/14/11 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 11
Lmao. Like father, like son. Nick & Ben are adorable together.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Is it sad that I keep forgetting Ben isn't real? <3Pengi
