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Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/11 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 15

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!! LUCY KISSED BRIAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FUCK YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (I'm SO happy! I'll think of this now, while at the wedding reception I'm going to shortly--I cried during my friend's wedding & am gonna try not to cry during the reception-haha)

I SO want to know Brian/Lucy's POV's that led them to the kiss!!!!!! *swoons happily* Sorry Carter, you were too slow!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

Reviewer: cowgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/11 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 15

Nick got to use his dynamite! :) What on earth does Brian think he is doing!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/11 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 14

Oooh. If they harm one hair on Brian's head, Lucy is going ot go ape shit on them!!!!!!! She's more than prepared to pull out her travel size, hidden in the tight dress, pointy sticks!!!!!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/11 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 14

"Why?" Bri sputtered. "Why would you ever want to see this? My eyes are burning. Burning. That poor llama. Poor, poor, little llama."

LMFAO. That made me die laughing. Poor llamas. Omg. *wheezes* so funny.

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/11 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 13

Just don't leave Lucy behind Carter! I mean it! And don't leave weeble-wobbly Brian behind either!

Nick is going to get them all practically killed, I just know it! Which is why he needs Lucy to help him out. (I have read Nancy Drew books & The Hardy Boys - ever Hardy Boys book known to man, except for 11 book, which I was never able to find-lol)

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~



Author's Response: Nick's hurt that you have such a lack of trust in him Lenni. :) But, I agree that having a smart female around is NEVER a bad thing!

Reviewer: yeni_tch Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/11 07:50 am Title: Chapter 12

Wow I love this history!!!!! & the parts where mi amorsote bello (Aka Nick) speaks with song titles is so cool!!!! Although I know the first time was impossible to him not do it because he was nervous!!!! But this time I gave a lot of laughter  because he did it with all intention of disturbing to Brian!!!! Its a great story!!!! I love it!!!! Congratulations!!!!



Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I love writing Nick because he can just break out into random things (like song titles) and no one would question it. :) - Jen

Reviewer: cowgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/11 05:31 am Title: Chapter 12

Why do I have a feeling that Brian and Lucy are going to have to pretend to be married or something like that :)

Reviewer: bsbfan4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/11 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 12

lol...wonder what Nick's bright idea is this time!



Author's Response: Nick and bright are two words that don't go together often - Jen

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/11 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 12

Roflmao!!!!!! God, Nick, you can be such a dipshit.

And trust me, Lucy won't tell on yah - she's soooo in love with Brian! She's harmless, but soooo crushing on him - lol. Just keep her safe & she'll gladly weild her pointy sticks to protect yah.

Lucy is SO me! Lmao. Loving it!!!!! I'm glad no one's around to see the bilg ole shit-eating grin on my face right now - lol.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~



Author's Response: But oh, what a hot dipshit he is! :) - Jen

Reviewer: Southern_Sweetie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/11 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 12

You guys are doing such a great on this story!! Love it, can't wait for an update!!!



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. We hope you're having as much fun reading it as we're having writing it! - Jen

Reviewer: foreverebel7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/11 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 12

omg, seriously this chapter is HILARIOUS..oh my god, are you the guys in 'nsync...bahaha...and the backstreet song titles that Nick is stuck on..

really guys, it's amazing..u keep up the good work :)

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/11 04:03 am Title: Chapter 11

Oye vey in a half shell. That Bitch of a cop can NOT be closing in on them! She does & Lucy is gonna go all punk ass, on her stupid ass!!!!!!!! *waves my pointy sticks*

And when I imagined being cuffed by a Backstreet Boy, this is NOT wat I had in mind! Carter, you'd BETTER have the key!!!!!!!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

Reviewer: bsbfan4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/11 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 11

I wonder how she found them...by the way, what's with all the Beatles references? 



Author's Response: A friend/reader calls Jen and I Lennon and McCartney, respectively... lol So it's more a nod to that than the Beatles. <3Pengi

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/11 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 11

Lmao at daisy duke. So funny, great update!

Reviewer: bsbfan4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/11 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 10

That's so NOT what they need right now!!!