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Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/11 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 8

I had to read the first few chapters twice to be able to clearly understand it. You have a good explanation so I blame my brain for not picking it up the first time. I'm glad Julie was already home. and a proposal.... Wow! :)

Author's Response:

aw I'm sorry you had to read twice. I know this story probably has some confusing bits in it because I throw the reader in different directions. Yes, home again...  Thanks for the review Ritz!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/11 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 14

Nick is a persistent little bastard and Kevin is a stalker :P

Author's Response:

the men in Julie's life now because of the accident, what a strange mix!  *sigh* Kevin...  Thanks for reading and reviewing Tracy! 

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/11 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 13

I think I am right about Brian but we eill see...

Author's Response:

ooooh theories about Brian??? not many people have any of those, he appears to be just an "extra" lol... but maybe there is more?? LOL. Thanks for the review Tracy.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/11 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 12

Nickolas Gene....I have no words....no words at all....

Author's Response:

now you are informed of the peach scene... if you ever see reference to Nick and peaches you will know what we are talking about.  Thanks for the review Tracy. 

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/11 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 11

I think Nick slept with her to get information....but maybe he really does like her....confusing bastard lol.

Author's Response:

he is confusing and he doesn't make it easier later... Maybe he just needed to prove that he had a way with women after all?  Thanks for the review Tracy.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/11 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 10

So Nick is looking for Brian? I wonder why...

Author's Response:

hrm... that IS THE question! LOL.  Thanks for the review Tracy.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/11 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 9

This chapter was funny too. Mary saying Brian was gay...lol.

Author's Response:

I thought people would be amused at Mary calling Brian gay.. LOL.  But she also is too consumed in Patrick to notice much else going on around her. :)  Thanks for the review Tracy.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/11 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 8

I have a feeling it won't work out with this jeff guy.

Author's Response:

yah... I just felt like I needed to tie up the loose ends of her boyfriend... she's back, he thinks she's the same, she's trying to resume life, it was only natural to throw him back in the picture but 5 years for Julie has passed.  Thanks for the review Tracy!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/11 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 7

I think she has feelings for Kevin. But I'm not sure what he meant by "help him"....now I'm curious....

Author's Response:

Julie doesn't know what he meant by "Help him" and as you ill find out (or found out cause I see you read more) it causes her lots of grief and headaches.  Yah... feelings for Kevin *sigh*   Thanks for the review Tracy.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/11 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 6

LOL Howie. "windex is blue". That was amusing. Somehow I don't think fixing her is that simple....

Author's Response:

I loved the windex is blue comment... it is probably by far my favorite "humorous" part of the story. There is a whole lot of humor though so not a lot to choose from.  I felt like a genius using that phrase though. LOL.  Thanks for the review Tracy.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/11 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 5

Hahaha. Nick is a asshole but I like it. Very intriguing. I am enjoying this so far, Lore!

Author's Response:

Nick just sometimes plays into that asshole role very well and it's hard to pass it up. :)   I like how he thinks he's good with the ladies and Julie totally rejects him...this time.  Thanks for the review Tracy.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/11 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 4

Yay! Kevin sounds like he wants to help Julie. Edith makes me LOL. "tall drink of water" :) love it!

Author's Response:

I had fun with Edith.  The woman who did costume design for Blue Hawaii was really named Edith and I just had to use her, she looked too fantastic to pass up.  I loved that too, it just fit the woman's picture.  Thanks for the review Tracy.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/11 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 3

Elivs? Pretty cool :) I hope Kevin gets her letter...

Author's Response:

As soon as I knew she jumped to a beach, Elvis in the 60's flew into my mind!  I thought it would great if, after her remembering all the near death jumps, if she had a great experience that none of us will ever get a chance to have.  Thanks for the review Tracy. :)

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/11 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 2

So when she gets nauseous it signals a time jump? Interesting...

Author's Response:

Pain and nauseousness... I don't imagine jumping uncontrollably is very pleasant and don't envy Julie having done it for 5 years! :)  Thanks for the review Tracy.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/11 11:59 am Title: Chapter 1

Ohh sounds like this will be interesting. Reading on :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for givng my "baby" a shot!  I just love writing this story and happy when anyone takes the time to read it. :) thanks for the review Tracy.