Date: 09/21/11 05:01 am Title: Chapter 16
she just keeps getting in deeper and deeper. :( poor Donnie. Great chapter!
Author's Response: I know right sad to say he hasn't done her worst to him yet. she will get her soon enough. thanks for the review
Date: 09/11/11 04:29 am Title: Chapter 15
oh I don't believe for a SECOND that Jordan cares he hurt her. Not really! Great chapter!!
Author's Response: maybe for like 3 10th of a second he didlol thanks for the review:)
Date: 09/07/11 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lynne makes me so angry! I understand that she's scared of Jordan's retribution if she leaves, but living in hell is not worth it.
Author's Response: I know n there is a reason for her choices and all will be revealed soon thank you for the review
Date: 09/07/11 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 14
I really really really can't understand Lynne..how can she do that to herself and to Donnie..she needs to get back to him..but i know that she's scared from Jordan
Author's Response: Lynne does have issues and you will see in the next couple of chapters why she is the way she is
Date: 09/07/11 02:36 am Title: Chapter 14
She's an idiot and got exactly what she was asking for. She better start changing her mind soon! Great chapter!
Author's Response: I won't disagree but you will find out the reasons why she stays soon enough. thank you
Date: 09/04/11 12:07 am Title: Chapter 13
OHHH Poor Donnie!! Don't blame Chantelle either. I wouldn't want her back in my house either after picking Jordan over Donnie. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Lol and thank you. unfortunately Lynne's gonna have to learn the hard way
Date: 09/03/11 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh poor naive Lynne and sweet Donnie! Jordan is sick playing with people's lives!
Author's Response: I know on all parts but that's what happens when you don't let your heart decide. Thank you for the review!
Date: 09/02/11 02:33 am Title: Chapter 12
damn, what a bastard Jordan is. I'm ready to kick his ass. GREAT chapter!
Author's Response: I think a lot of people are. thanks for the review!
Date: 09/01/11 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 12
You know when you read something & you want to kill a character for being a ass it's a great story. JUST SAYING and if someone doesn't hurt him soon(trip him anything come on) I'll be waiting til the next chapter just hoping for it ;-)
Author's Response: he is pretty sick and maybe one day somebody will hurt him but until then....... thank you for the review
Date: 08/31/11 02:41 am Title: Chapter 11
BRAVO!!!! Loved it!! Ready for more! :)
Author's Response: thank you and I'm working on it
Date: 08/30/11 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 11
Love it can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 08/30/11 01:53 am Title: Chapter 10
Oh poor Donnie, he can't seem to catch a break!
Author's Response: he does need some help doesn't he? thanks for the review.
Date: 08/28/11 05:54 am Title: Chapter 10
girl, when you gonna see it's donnie for you?? great chapter!
Author's Response: thanks for thereview and as for Donnie a nd Lynne well.... * whistles& walks away*
Date: 08/28/11 03:28 am Title: Chapter 10
God is she really that stupid that she can't see what's right in her front of her face. Why can't she just get over Jordan and be happy with Donnie?
Great chapter. can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I know but what fun would that be if she fell into donnie's arms right away*grinz*
Date: 08/26/11 12:29 am Title: Chapter 9
I love this story! I really hope they get together soon! :)
Author's Response: I'd like that too but Jordan isn't gonna play nice. Glad you like the story and thanks for the review
