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Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/11 04:39 am Title: Chapter Two - Lost It All

I love the way you got into his head for this. One thing about your writing, you make the emotions incredibly vivid. I didn't expect you to put Nick in a wheelchair, but I love that you did. This cost Nick terribly, and I am so curious about the accident. Can't wait to see you go further with this. :)

Author's Response:

Hold onto that curiosity for a while longer, Rose! I'm not ready to reveal what happened just yet :P But yes, no one walked away completely whole from the accident. Sadly.

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/11 08:14 pm Title: Chapter Two - Lost It All

Poor tormented, Nick, Hopefully Brian will come to understand that some things are out of ones control. Unless Nick was being reckless it wasn't his fault and the guys in a wheelchair to boot! That has to be a terrible feeling, knowing someone died while on your watch. Glad everyone else seems to get that. I see this isn't going to be a yippety skippety happy little tale. Look at Srah, getting her angst on! Nicely done. :O)



Author's Response:

Nope. This is definitely not a fluffy fic, though there will be a teeny bit towards the end (literally, in the last chapter lol), but that's just because I love my Nick and Brian and just want them to be happy! lol As for Brian forgiving Nick, I guess that's easier said than done, right? Plus, I haven't revealed all in my crystal ball yet, so I hope that gives you enough incentive to keep reading :P

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/11 08:09 pm Title: Chapter One - Anniversary

aww dead Baylee, bitter Brian and an understanding Leighanne. Welcome back to the world of writing. I'm so glad to see a story from you on the most recent page (that doesn't involve killing Nick) Although this is only the first chapter. LOL



Author's Response:

LOL No, no worries! There will be no dead Nick in this story. Death is what the story stems from and is based around, but, lol, no dead Nicks in this :P Glad you're reading! Yay!

Reviewer: Reemo Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/11 05:58 pm Title: Chapter Two - Lost It All

cant stop my tears :( ... this is tragedy ... its very sad and heart breaking , poor Nick cant imagine what is he going through ... please update soon



Author's Response:

*hands you tissues* There, there. I'm glad you're reading and liking it! Your tears are a major compliment! It's nice to know I can still pull off angst well :)

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/11 04:06 pm Title: Chapter Two - Lost It All

Love that you got into Nick's head in this chapter!! Poor Nick. I had a feeling it might've been a car accident; it wasn't like I thought he could have murdered Baylee in cold blood or something LOL. I wonder if he'd been drinking, or if it was just an accident because of the storm. I can understand why Brian would be upset either way, but I'm wondering if Nick actually did something wrong, or if it couldn't have been prevented.

Nice twist with the wheelchair at the end! I wonder what happened to him. I got the vibe he must have been injured pretty badly, since it said he was in no shape to attend the funeral, and I'm guessing Kate is a physical therapist or someone who takes care of him.

I'm glad I got at least once answer, but now you've given me more questions, damn you LOL. Just kidding; I love stories like this!! Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response:

Yes! I'm glad you didn't see the wheelchair coming! I was trying to be subtle, and I'm glad I pulled it off! Yes, Kate will be explained soon, but slowly and in pieces, just like everything else in this story, including the specifics of the accident :)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/11 10:35 am Title: Chapter One - Anniversary

Great start!  Looking forward to more and finding out what happened.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Hope you keep reading :)

Reviewer: Penrod2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/11 02:15 am Title: Chapter One - Anniversary

this is sad. but it's good. keep going,

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you like it, despite the angst :'(

Reviewer: steffilu84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/11 12:36 am Title: Chapter One - Anniversary

I was so excited to see your name on the update page. I've missed reading your stories. Wow, already at this story. I look forward to reading it even if it is horribly tragic. I don't know I'm a sucker for drama stories like this.



Author's Response:

YAY! You're one of my most faithful readers ever, so thank you for still reading my stuff, even though it's been ages! Haha We ALL love some drama :)

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/11 12:31 am Title: Chapter One - Anniversary

I love this! What way to suck us in! I'm beyond curious to find out just HOW Nick ended up causing Baylee's death. And I'm so happy to see you back on here. Love it. LOVE. lol

Author's Response:

Patience, young grasshopper. Patience. All shall be revealed in due course...mwahahahahahah LOL But, no, really it will...as long as you and Julie keep pushing me to update, otherwise, we all know how I end up :P You guys are my fairy fic-mothers!

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/11 12:16 am Title: Chapter One - Anniversary

SARAH!!! I am SO excited to see you back here with a new story! What a horrifically sad start, but you know I love me some sad panda stuff, especially when it's about Brian and Nick! I can't wait to see where this is going and find out how Nick may have been somehow responsible for Baylee's death. So tragic, but a great way to suck me in! POST MORE SOON!!!

Author's Response:

*sniffle* You and Rose are the bestest EVER!! EVER!! If it wasn't for you, I probably wouldn't have gotten even this much written, so thanks! And yes...all shall be revealed...veryyyy slowly lol