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Reviewer: Kentuckychickrk Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/11 06:17 am Title: Death #5- Caffinated Pancakes

Once again ~ Love it! As I mentioned on the first thread, the way Nick rolls/jumps/skips around on that platform always terrifies me and I love that you added the Red Bull to literally push him over the edge :)

Author's Response: I agree, I always thought the same thing. Thanks for the review- Tracy

Reviewer: starbeamz2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/11 07:10 pm Title: Death #5- Caffinated Pancakes

Still amazing and gruesome! Love it! Poor Brian. I guess no one would think about drinking that much Red Bull after that lol



Author's Response: :) thanks so much. I am glad people are enjoying it a second time around! -Tracy

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/11 02:44 pm Title: Death #5- Caffinated Pancakes

Did you actually have to rewrite this? I couldn't even tell... It's just as good as the original; you did a great job recreating the magic LOL. Glad you took the time to rewrite and repost, cause this was epic!

Author's Response: Since I don't have a computer yes I had to rewrite the whole thing. As I wrote it it seemed to come back to me, but it's more detailed now. Thanks Julie :D

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/11 07:44 am Title: Death #5- Caffinated Pancakes

Yay, glad you were able to re-write it Tracy!  I only just saw that the whole story was deleted, what a nightmare!



Author's Response: Yes it was! Thanks for reading it again Steph :) -Tracy

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/11 06:35 am Title: Death #5- Caffinated Pancakes

LMAO still epic Tracy! I know it sucks having to rewrite, but I'm glad to see that you are. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much Rose, glad you enjoyed it again! -Tracy