Date: 07/28/12 09:50 pm Title: Death #60 - Bang Bang, Choo-Choo Train
I did read this yesterday on my phone, but wasn't logged in.
Loved it! Poor dead Nick, lol, blacking out after a head injury and falling on the train lines would've been bad enough, but to have his legs and head severed too is just gruesome. Is it wrong that I laughed at Brian saying he could be sleeping and then AJ saying "He looks like he's dead", lmao.
Awful way to go, but awesome!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it, Steph! LOL You know I always have to go for the gory details! Being run over by a train can't be pretty! I think AJ going "He doesn't look like he's sleeping. He looks like he's dead" was my favorite part of the whole thing; at least, that's the part that still had me cracking up when I finished it. So is it wrong that you laughed? Not in my mind! If it was, we can be sick and wrong together LOL. Thanks for the review!! :)
Date: 07/27/12 06:12 pm Title: Death #60 - Bang Bang, Choo-Choo Train
LOL I love you end notes, it's like sesame street! I can't believe Brian picked up the head.
Author's Response: Thanks! LOL I definitely had Sesame Street in mind. And Brian just wanted to close his eyes... so it would look as if he were only sleeping... *snort* Thanks, Lore!
Date: 07/27/12 04:28 pm Title: Death #60 - Bang Bang, Choo-Choo Train
LMFAO! OMG Julie this is just why I love you lol. You chopped him up into bits and all he wanted was to ride the Hogwarts train. Sorry Dead Nick!
Author's Response: Thanks ZDR! Aww, I know, it wasn't such a magical trip for him! Sorry Dead Nick!
Date: 07/27/12 10:02 am Title: Death #60 - Bang Bang, Choo-Choo Train
LMAO. This was amazing, using Harry Potter in yet another epically written death. I loved the "train's leaving the station, Nick Carter" reference! I also liked when Brian closed Nick's eyes, it made me go Awww until cynical AJ said "no it wouldn't" ROFL. I also liked the description of Nick's various appendages flying everywhere and catching on fire ;) great job!
Author's Response: Thanks, Tracy! I've wanted to do a train one forever because of that line from Punk'd, but I wasn't sure how to put it all together until I thought of the Platform 9 3/4 thing with them being in London right now. And whenever you can combine various limb choppage with burning, it's a win-win situation! LOL Glad you enjoyed! :)
