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Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/11 04:31 am Title: Death # 55- In Pieces by a cell phone

Okay, from now on, I am unplugging my phone.

~Lenni~



Author's Response:

So do I now, Its scary.

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/11 08:34 am Title: Death #53- De ja vu or something

I loved it! Before I saw your chapter end notes, I was like 'Wow! Final destination....' Good work! Poor Nicky, he should have checked the stage first before running. lol

Author's Response:

I'm glad someone thought that before reading the end notes! HAHA!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/11 07:29 am Title: Death #53- De ja vu or something

So he dreamt the fire?  Aww poor Nick, lol



Author's Response:

He had a vision of the fire, a la Final Destination, but it didn't exactly come true...

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/11 04:43 am Title: Death #53- De ja vu or something

LMAO!!! I love Nick causing a stampede, then getting crushed to death in it. Fail, Nick. Epic fail. Successful death, though!

Author's Response:

I have to admit, I'm having fun killing this poor boy!

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/11 04:25 am Title: Death #53- De ja vu or something

LMFAO awww at least he tried to warn everyone. Too bad it got him crushed to death.

Author's Response:

Yea, he tried to be a good guy...

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/11 04:23 am Title: Death #53- De ja vu or something

LOL definitely inspired by final destination.



Author's Response:

Yep, totally was! Not even joking!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/11 04:17 am Title: Death #53- De ja vu or something

Oh, Carter. You basically killed yourself that time.

~Lenni~



Author's Response:

I know, pretty sad....

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/11 08:23 am Title: Death #52- Not So Amusing

Poor Nicky.... But I'm glad he had fun before dying... lol

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/11 07:51 am Title: Death #52- Not So Amusing

Gruesome but funny too!  I like that his head landed at the candy floss cart, lol

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/11 07:46 am Title: Death #51 Taco Hell

LOL I loved this!  Death by Taco Bell sign, great.  We don't have Taco Bell here, so I'm going to google what the sign looks like :)



Author's Response: Thanks Steph!!! I was inspired at work lol

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/11 07:39 am Title: Death #50- Falling for you

Started off so romantic, lol, poor Nick



Author's Response:

I know... maybe after 947 more deaths, he will actually get to live!

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/11 04:46 am Title: Death #52- Not So Amusing

LMFAO you're getting really good at these decapitations! I love the last bit about his head landing in a cotton candy cart, great image!

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/11 04:37 am Title: Death #51 Taco Hell

LMFAO squish! I love it, random and awesome. :)

Author's Response: Thanks rose lol I was inspired at work :)

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/11 04:34 am Title: Death #52- Not So Amusing

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeew! No more cotton candy for me!

~Lenni~

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/11 04:30 am Title: Death #52- Not So Amusing

LMFAO I knew what was gonna happen as son as he jumped the fence to get his hat. Thanks for delivering! Another decapitation WIN!!! I love that his head landed on a cotton candy cone, btw! Nice mental image there, LMFAO.