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Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/12 12:21 am Title: Kill # 22- Dont Eat The Raspberries

Eeeeew! Nickolas is quite warped in this fic.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~



Author's Response: Just saw this, thanks Lenni glad you enjoyed haha ;) -Tracy

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/12 10:49 pm Title: Kill # 22- Dont Eat The Raspberries

Super freaky how I had raspberries in my fridge, okay! I still think you've got surveillance cameras in here and now I'm afraid lol. I loved how you incorporated their real life tweets, although I can't imagine I'd taste very good in shake form!! Also I giggled a lot at Nick humming Blame Canada and how you incorporated my tea drinking and Sailor Moon habits. I feel like I should maybe change my ringtone to WMYB? Or maybe not. And also maybe not go to London LOL.

I will say I'm glad it wasn't a joint effort because if Niall had assisted Nick in killing me I probably would have cried! So instead he gets to drink me in shake form. Clearly Nick has it out for him as well.

Annnyway I'm getting very wordy in this review. lol great job Tracy. It was really funny!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! Once I saw Howie's tweet about the milkshake I knew that would be part of the story. I decided to put them in because it made it more realistic. Had no idea about the raspberries I swear! But I'm glad you enjoyed it and I enjoyed killing you :)

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/12 04:38 pm Title: Kill # 22- Dont Eat The Raspberries

Nick's milkshake brings all the boys to the yard... LMAO I love that he made Niall drink Steph!! And I love how you tied it back to that tweet of Howie's about the nasty protein shake. WIN! The inclusion of Blame Canada was a nice touch as well! Loved it, Tracy!!

Author's Response: I had a couple ideas I could have used. Like the one about the dead body I was talking about....but I thought to myself....protein shake. Then I looked at Howie's twitter and it came to me lmao. I was humming Blame Canada as I wrote it so I felt like this tied in. Thanks for the review, Julie :)

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/12 03:44 pm Title: Kill # 22- Dont Eat The Raspberries

I love that you ued real tweets from the guys!! awesome, he fed her to Niall! way to incorporate both her loves Tracy!



Author's Response: There was a few ideas I had for this, but I thought about Howie's tweet and said to myself, why not? It totally made sense :) thanks so much, Lore!

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/12 03:36 pm Title: Kill # 22- Dont Eat The Raspberries

LMFAO Tracy! Well, Steph did wanna meet Niall. Just not from the inside...

Author's Response: LOL true. She did get her last request! Thanks Rose!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/12 02:46 pm Title: Kill # 22- Dont Eat The Raspberries

LOL poor Steph!! Sliced and diced into a protein shake and fed to Niall is just awesome Tracy :)  I loved it!



Author's Response: Nick's milkshake brings all the boys to the yard lmao thanks Steph!