Date: 08/26/12 08:38 pm Title: The Kiss
Probably one of the best alternative universe stories I've ever read. Triple thumbs up.
Date: 08/13/12 12:18 pm Title: Elizabeth
Wonderful story. I loved it.
Author's Response:
Date: 07/03/12 01:41 pm Title: Elizabeth
Awwwww, such a cute ending. I loved this story and I am considering reading more of your work. You are an awesome writer, I like how you have put this story together with all these different elements and really good descriptions to match. This story was highly enjoyable and easy to follow, the characters were likable and detailed. Well done :)
Author's Response:
Tracy I'm so glad you said that. I was hella nervous when I wrote the ending. I have an ending phobia it takes me forever to write the last chapter. Ugh! Why thank you so much for the compliments I really appreciate it. Although I wrote this story pretty fast, it did take some researching and outlining. But I had tons of fun coming up with funny events and laughing over the reviews I got. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review and once again I'm delighted that you enjoyed JOK!! Thank you!
Date: 07/03/12 01:33 pm Title: Games
Ok so now Nick is being a diva this time. Storming off like that...tsk tsk. I'm glad Abby went after him this time, the two of them need each other, if not for them but for the baby as well :)
Date: 07/03/12 01:11 pm Title: Mow Down
Just the image of Nick racing lawnmowers is very amusing. AJ is a dirty boy but his phone call might screw things up. Curious to see what will happen now, but I'm guessing it is just Abby being hormonal lol.
Author's Response:
Pregnancy definitely makes you hormonal. lol. Those two just tend to jump the gun all the time.
Oh Nicky riding a lawnmower. hot! Thanks girlie.
Date: 07/03/12 11:51 am Title: The Tog Up
This was one of my favorite chapters, loved the descriptions, gave me a nice visual. Hehe ;) I'm impressed Nick wrestled the pig for her. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Hehe my friend Patty gave me this idea. She said they do that back in Texas and I thought. How hot would Nick loom wrestling a pig. Hehe! So glad you liked it. Thank you Tracy.
Date: 07/03/12 11:12 am Title: I Missed You
LOL Nick doesn't know what he's about to get himself into. I enjoy Nick and Abby together and I'm happy he's excited about the baby. I'm also glad they had a talk and patched things up :)
Author's Response:
Awe I'm so glad you like them as a couple. I was worried they might be too corny! Yay yes they finally spoke up and are in good terms. Thank you girl!
Date: 07/03/12 10:58 am Title: Good Luck
Again AJ is being a lil scene stealer. I love how you write him lol. Henry....he seems like one of those big tall cowboys ;) Nick needs to stop having these little hissy fits and just talk to Abby. Annie really screwed things up now, didn't she? Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Why thanks Tracy. I really enjoy writing AJ. ! I feel like in real life he swears like a sailor (like me) and he's always making Ro and the guys laugh. Girl as for Henry that's exactly how I pictured him too. Hehe. Misunderstandings....and Nick acting like he's the knocked up one . Thank you Tracy!
Date: 07/03/12 10:48 am Title: The Test
I love being right LOL. Poor Abby...Nick causing all that commotion and now she's pregnant with his kid. SMH. I love that she gave him the gym, but how the hell did she get that kind of money? As for Nick, I'm glad he is gonna try to get Abby despite what her mother said. Reading on!
Author's Response:
Hahaha yes, you were right. He sounds like the pregnant one. lol. I thought her giving him the gym, because she knew he couldn't afford it would be a great gesture and she was able to afford it with the money she won on their Vegas trip. The smoker voiced lady is a bitch.
Date: 07/03/12 09:28 am Title: Airsickness
HOWIE???? HOWIE! I was NOT expecting Howard. Holy shit. What a scumbag. I bet he was scheduling Nick for those shoots and screwing around behind his back the whole time. This is insane, looks like Tiffany is just loose lol. As for Abby, I suspect a pregnancy...I got a feeling. Her dad is a major dickhead. Reading on.
Author's Response:
I had thought of it being Brian. Then I thought he would really never do that. So I thought Howies character fit the cheater profile. lol. Omg @ the loose comment too damn funny! Dum dum dum dum! Her dad loves her, but he can really be a dickhead.
Date: 07/03/12 09:13 am Title: The Truth
Oh god Nickolas, what the fuck. You and your big mouth probably just screwed everything up for Abby. I understand he was hurt, but he didn't have to do all of that. I want to kick him seriously. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Nicky really did it this time. Ugh...even I was mad at him when I wrote this. But I thought what a way for everything to come out. We can both kick him ;) Thank you girl.
Date: 07/03/12 09:10 am Title: F**k You
LMAO at AJ in this chapter and Rochelle hitting him. Classic. Nick is acting like a jealous little boy when Kevin is around and Kevin is a dirty flirt. Tiffany....don't get me started but WTF is she doing with abortion papers! I'm guessing "boss man" knocked her up. I liked the end when Nick told her to fuck off. *claps loudly* get it Nicky!
Author's Response:
Hahaha @ the dirty flirt comment.
My mom smacks my dad over the head when he says something wrong...it's so funny. Boss man gets all the blame poor dude! I thought it would be appropriate for him to tell her that. You know we say some mean things when we all mad. Tha k you Tracy!
Date: 06/24/12 12:34 pm Title: Trust Me
I'm glad Nick is deciding what he wants. I know it must be hard for him to break it to Tiffany, but it has to be done. And now they are getting a little dirty. Sexy time. Hahaha. Reading on.
Author's Response:
It's about time he did. Now to see if he goes through with speaking up. Hahaha I loved that comment of ours about them getting a little dirty. I thought they could be a little naughty lol. Thank you Tracy!
Date: 06/24/12 12:28 pm Title: Boss Man
Abby is playing with fire here. I don't see any good coming out of her kissing her sister's boss. I really love how you described him. You have nice descriptions through the chapter.
Author's Response:
Hehe I know, right! The things we do to make others jealous when we are in love. But you're right that only made things messier. Awe thanks you know that's my hunk there...thank you Tracy for the compliments you're too kind!
Date: 06/24/12 12:06 pm Title: Really Bad Day
Tiffany is just making things worse for Nick honestly by popping up and leaving so much. I think Abby is gonna end up telling her or Nick will, I hope one of them comes clean. Another good chapter :)
Author's Response:
It's going to be hard for either one of them to come clean. Eek. Thank you girlie
