Date: 11/06/11 08:47 am Title: Unsuspecting Sunday Afternoon
I love how you paid attention to even the smallest of details! The simple line of describing her green eyes, that even emerald would be jealous captivated me for some reason! I love how you highlighted their Sunday moments, and man the way you described AJ and Cori's relationship with one another and engaging in slight foreplay makes me want a man now even MORE!!! Lmao!!
But that was such a sad, tragic twist you ended this story with! Wow... poor AJ! :( Truly an unsuspecting Sunday afternoon! :'( This was a great one-shot story Karin! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, I appreciate the feedback! I figured a song like that needed sundays to be highlighted ;) Yeah, it needed a twist, though, otherwise it's just a sappy romance...
Date: 08/28/11 04:43 pm Title: Unsuspecting Sunday Afternoon
Very nice. Enjoyed it. Keep up the amazing work.
Date: 08/16/11 05:53 pm Title: Unsuspecting Sunday Afternoon
tears are runing in my face was so beautiful
Author's Response:
Aw! Thanks a lot!!! Hope you enjoyed it!
Date: 08/15/11 02:43 am Title: Unsuspecting Sunday Afternoon
I quite enjoyed it! Very nice and sweet! I knew the end and was still not expecting it. :)
