Date: 09/18/17 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 5 - First Mission..... Part 2
:( great chapter again.
Date: 06/22/13 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 5 - First Mission..... Part 2
Poor Patricia. ç_ç Her story is really sad, stuck where she died without even somewhere to go (i guess she can't go towards the light until she knows that her family moves on, right?).
And poor Nick. Between finding hard to believe that he can see ghost and wanting to help her,he's struck as well.
Author's Response: Yes! that's what's holding her back, she wants her Mommy to know she's gone. Thank you for the review.
Date: 01/31/12 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 5 - First Mission..... Part 2
Oh geez... How sad for Patty and how confusing for Nick! I'm definitely anxious to read more experiences he has... Great job!
Author's Response: Yay! hope you stick around till the end... Thank you! :)
Author's Response: Yay! hope you stick around till the end... Thank you! :)
Date: 10/22/11 11:01 am Title: Chapter 5 - First Mission..... Part 2
I giggled at AJ brushing off spiders to be nothing... Alex honey, I know good and well your ass would be the first one to run off, screaming like a little girl! Lol.
But oh wow... the ending of this chapter is simply heartbreaking! The way Patty begged and pleaded for Nick to tell her mom that she's dead, to the look she gave as she watched him walk away. :( Soooo sad.
Author's Response: LOL that was so freaking true! but we also know that AJ won't admit it and take every chance he could get to tease Nicky. :) I know it was heartbreaking but Nick's reaction was just normal. If I was him, maybe I won't even consider going back to help her at all. Thank you for reading this far! :)
Date: 09/25/11 05:01 am Title: Chapter 5 - First Mission..... Part 2
Aww Poor Patty. I hope he decides to go see her family. Great job with your dialogue and back story of wht happened to her. :O)
Author's Response: Thank you, Mare! I was actually nervous about this chapter being full of dialogues and lesser descriptive paragraph. I'm so glad you liked it! Yay! :)
Date: 09/24/11 12:46 am Title: Chapter 5 - First Mission..... Part 2
Oh Nick! Seriuosly, he dind't even do it for her. Ugh...that's not cool. Then again he's scared shitless...Hell, I would be too.
Author's Response: what she wanted Nick to do was freaking hard plus Nick is Nick.... lol thanks for the review, sweetheart. :)
Date: 09/19/11 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 5 - First Mission..... Part 2
Aw poor Patty, that must be so hard for her and Nick isn't going to help. But it's all new to him and he's bound to be shocked at seeing a ghost. Maybe he'll change his mind.
Author's Response: I hope he's really thinking hard if he's ready to help her. Thanks for reading, steph. and for your review as always. :)
Date: 09/19/11 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 5 - First Mission..... Part 2
oh he didn't help her?? oh no... I can understand why. I mean .. ghosts and all talking to you and asking for help. I'm not sure I would help. You did a great job on the ending. I liked it. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: um, hopefully Nick is on his hotel room thinking hard about this... but I would really understand him if he won't come back to the center and help Patty. aww Lore, thank you for your help and sticking with me. :)
