Date: 06/22/13 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 6 - First Mission..... Part 3
I knew Nick wouldn't do nothing for Patty.
Mh... I wonder who that Micheal is. And, especially, why he appeared only now and not during those four years.
Just a question. Why was Patty's body still unclaimed? Didn't she has some kind of ID to enter the concert?
Aside that, great chapter! ^__^ I'm really liking the story, even though it's a Nick's story. lol
Author's Response: You'll know more about Michael soon! and to answer your question, I must have not thought about that part carefully. In the Philippines, where I came from, we dont need ID to enter for a concert, unless of course we're claiming a VIP package. Patty's ticket was not front row. I should have mentioned she left her bag somewhere. Thanks for asking about that. :)
Date: 01/31/12 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 6 - First Mission..... Part 3
Yay he went back to help her!! He's such a great guy. :) Great chapter! Can't wait to find out how Patty sticking around for a while will affect Nick.
Author's Response: Of course Nickolas is a great guy... lol Thanks for leaving a review for every chapter! :)
Date: 10/23/11 06:01 am Title: Chapter 6 - First Mission..... Part 3
Aww damn, this just got deep! I'm glad Nick went back and decided to help Patty! :)
Author's Response: I was so proud of Carter! LOL I can't thank you enough for giving this story a chance. :)
Date: 09/25/11 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 6 - First Mission..... Part 3
I'm glad Patty was able to make it out of the Staples center and I lol'd at Nick not being bothered by talking to a ghost or knowing he shared a cab with one. I'm really enjoying this story Ritz. And yay! I'm all caught up! :O)
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you for nice reviews, Mare and I am soooo glad you are enjoying this! :)
Date: 09/24/11 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 6 - First Mission..... Part 3
Aww I'm glad he decided to help her, and also glad Patty met another ghost who can help her out.
Author's Response: we're all glad Nicky gave in and decided to help her... Thanks for the review, dear! :)
Date: 09/24/11 12:55 am Title: Chapter 6 - First Mission..... Part 3
Aaaah she has the Cullen 'watch you while you sleep' complex. lol. I'm glad Nick gave into helping her tho. Great job, Ritz.
Author's Response: LOL I didn't realize that until now.... Patty just wanted to make sure Nick would help her, if Nick didn't go back to Target Center I think Patty would have done something so Nick would help her. I'm glad you're catching up with the reading. THANK YOU! :)
Date: 09/23/11 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 6 - First Mission..... Part 3
I love it Ritz. I can't wait to read more. If I missed any grammar things it was because I got so into the story that I just kept reading. I read it twice to try to make sure I got them but ... lol I was just sucked in.
Author's Response: oh that's fine, my dear. And by the way thanks for making the ( ) thing, it made me aware what my mistakes were and how to correct it. I was like 'oh yeah it should be in not on...' thanks for taking time to help me with the grammar, reading this and reviewing! I really, really appreciate it! :)
