Date: 06/22/13 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 7 - First Mission..... Part 4
Ok, I found the answer for my previous question. lol
It mustn't be easy for Nick, I don't know if I'll be able to do what he's going to do. You'll never get used to this kind of things.
LMAO at Brian and his joke about the invisible girlfriend. lol
Author's Response: I love that invisible girlfriend joke, too. For a second, I told myself I was genius when I came up with that. lol. Thank you!
Date: 01/31/12 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 7 - First Mission..... Part 4
Oh wow... That's insane. I can't imagine being Nick and finding the words and the guts to tell Patty's mom what happened, but you can tell that he really wanted to help Patty. I hope that Patty and her family can find peace in all of this... Great chapter!
Author's Response: Yes, I wouldn't be able to do what Nick did. I was glad he was such a brave guy. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)
Date: 10/23/11 07:42 am Title: Chapter 7 - First Mission..... Part 4
I really love how you wrote this chapter! It's hard for me to explain, but it's like simple, yet so profound! I love the interaction between Patty and Nick! And gotta love AJ's response to Nick's favor! Lol. But, even with the smallest details in this story, you can tell that you really thought out of the box!
Now... the reveal. My GOSH that seriously tugged on my heartstrings! Definitely reminded me of the movie "Ghost". Poor Patty and Barbara! :'( That was really nice of Nick to also supply her with tickets to "claim" her daughter. This was really heartwrenching, and I loved the way you ended it!
Author's Response: Awww thank you so much! One of the nicest thing I've ever recieved for this story. You can really see how much I love AJ. lol I think Nick doubted that Barbara would believed him, so he thought giving her tickets would make it easier for her to check out MN. I loved the ending as well, you can tell I can't let go of Patty. lol
Date: 10/11/11 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 7 - First Mission..... Part 4
Aw that's too sad. But I think Mrs. Jasperson will be relieved to know what happened to her daughter, as opposed to go on living believing that her daughter will come back home. Great chapter and I feel bad for Nick having to do that.
Author's Response: Yay! you're catching up... lol. that was really hard for Nick, and I was so damn proud of Carter for having the courage to do so... Thanks for still reading the story, Erika. :)
Date: 10/03/11 11:05 am Title: Chapter 7 - First Mission..... Part 4
Aww I felt so sad for Patty's mum, all these years she's been hoping she made something of herself in New York when really she died at the concert no one knew she was at :( I wonder if she'll be freaked out by what Nick tells her.
Really enjoying this Ritz, such a great idea.
Author's Response: it was really pretty sad, but as a mommy she can never stop hoping and wishing, right? thanks for reading, Steph! :)
Date: 10/03/11 03:46 am Title: Chapter 7 - First Mission..... Part 4
Aww, that was heartbreaking. It took a lot of guts for Nick to tell Patty's Mom the truth and you did a great job describing it. :O)
Author's Response: I am so proud of Nick for having the courage to tell Patty's mom. Thanks for the compliment, Mare. It was really a heartbreaking moment and I wished I described the scene better. So I am happy you liked it! :)
Date: 10/01/11 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 7 - First Mission..... Part 4
He went through with telling her. It was a great chapter Ritz! Can't wait to see what's coming next.
Author's Response: Yes. and I am so proud of Nick! Thanks for the review, Lore and for still reading this story. :)
