Date: 06/25/13 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 8 - First Mission..... Part 5
Aw, Nick's message in the end was so sweet!
Author's Response: I agree. I think Nick matured a little because of Patty. :)
Date: 01/31/12 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 8 - First Mission..... Part 5
Aww, I love Nick's message at the end and I even more enjoyed each of the Boys' reactions to it. Haha! Great job with this... So many emotions! :)
Author's Response: Lol... that was a very random message to the rest of the boys, if only they knew what Nick had gone through. :) Thank you for still reading! :)
Author's Response: Lol... that was a very random message to the rest of the boys, if only they knew what Nick had gone through. :) Thank you for still reading! :)
Date: 10/23/11 08:57 am Title: Chapter 8 - First Mission..... Part 5
Wow. This was an absolutely beautiful chapter!! And I don't blame Nick, I fucking hate goodbyes too and wouldn't want to part with Patty sooo soon! The way you wrote Patty really draws you in, and like you said, I'm gonna miss her as well! :( I'm glad she's found the light though!
What a touching chapter, and I know it'll only continue to be more touching! :)
Author's Response: I had a feeling that if Patty wasn't a ghost, Nick would definitely asked her out. lol I became so attached to Patty that I didn't want to let her go, but she deserves to be peaceful at last. I'll always miss her, though. :)
Date: 10/11/11 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 8 - First Mission..... Part 5
The whole scene with the light and Patty seeing her dad was awesome! Nicely written, made me feel like I was there. Is it bad that I LOL at the reactions from the guys with Nick's message. Especially, AJ almost falling out of his chair. lol. Good job, Ritz ;)
Author's Response: Awww Thank you so much, Erika. It felt so nice writing that scene... and it's not bad, if Nick said that message in real life, I think most of the fans will laugh hard. lol
Date: 10/08/11 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 8 - First Mission..... Part 5
Aww nice scene with Patty and the mom. And yay to Patty crossing over and Nick's message to his fans at the end. :O)
Author's Response: I find it really funny that his message to the fans in the end was the first that crossed my mind, and I had to think of the story backwards. I am really glad that Mrs. Jasperson isn't a stubborn one and believed Nick right away. I guess Nick didn't want any more drama and thought 5 chapters were enough. Thank you, Mare!
Date: 10/07/11 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 8 - First Mission..... Part 5
Aww that was sad but good, glad Patty got to cross over at the end. Great chapter Ritz :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I was glad too but I'm gonna miss her.... lol
Date: 10/06/11 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 8 - First Mission..... Part 5
oh how sweet for Patty! I like how her mother tried to protect him from being discovered. I wonder about this Michael fella too. Hrm .. can't wait for the next update Ritz.
Author's Response: Michael is just a random guy at first but Nick wanted it otherwise.... lol Thanks for sticking with me, Lore. Now, we're off to the second mission *grins*
