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Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/13 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Mr. Big Ben.... Part 1

Wow.

This was really really sad. I would have loved to see and read how they remembered him but I know it wasn't really the main point of the chapter and of the mission. 



Author's Response: I love Mr. Big Ben. I didn't try to write that part because I was afraid I wouldn't give justice to that beautiful moment. thanks for all your feedback. They are all much appreciated. :)

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/12 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Mr. Big Ben.... Part 1

Aww... Someone personally connected to Nick! That's gotta be even tougher, finding out he passed on and seeing him there! Great chapter. I just read your responses - I can't believe English isn't your first language. You do a great job conveying emotions through your writing! :)

Author's Response: I wanted to torture Nick so giving him a fan as his first mission and someone close to him as the second... LOL. Oh, thank you! I'm from the Philippines... English is like our second language here. Thank you so much for the compliment! *blushes*

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/11 09:50 am Title: Chapter 9 - Mr. Big Ben.... Part 1

Wow Ritz... this chapter was amazing! Definitely different! I truly thought Big Ben was really there, until, of course, Big Ben was surprised that Nick could see him! Man... this whole story, but particularly this chapter really makes me think if that's how our deceased loved ones are... standing beside us, making remarks that they know we can't hear. :'( I can't stop saying how truly amazing this whole fic is Ritz!

Ironically, when I was in middle school, we had a security guard named Ben, and we called him "Big Ben". He was such a sweetheart... the biggest teddy bear you'd ever meet! One recess, when I was playing volleyball with my friends, he came into the court and started joking with us. He went off to play basketball with some boys while I took a break from volleyball to finish up some homework. Next thing I knew, a golf cart came racing into the courts, urging kids to move. I looked up to see Big Ben on the ground. Staff chased us out of the courts, and as I walked past, I heard someone say, "He's not breathing... I can't revive him!" Big Ben had died from a heart attack. :(

So, of course as I read this chapter, I thought of an old security guard that became a friend of mine. :( But again, this is just truly amazing Ritz, and I fucking LOVE you for writing this great fic! :)



Author's Response: That was a really sad story and I'm sorry if this story brought up some memories. :( Hope Big Ben is in a very good place right now. I am using names that first comes to my mind, the only names I'm reserching are the last names because I'm not familiar with those. I believe in this ghost stuff because my sister can see them, but luckily they don't talk to her and ask for her help. Thank you, Reb and I hope by now you know that I freaking LOVE you too!

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/11 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Mr. Big Ben.... Part 1

Oh that must've been a shock for Nick. He thought he was talking to the live Ben. Poor Nick. :)



Author's Response: Oh yes, I think he will be traumatized if he won't learn how to distinguish ghosts from live ones soooon. lol Thank you, Erika, for trying to catch up. :)

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/11 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Mr. Big Ben.... Part 1

ah... big ben sounds sweet.  That was a nice chapter Ritz.



Author's Response: Thank you for reading, Lore! It makes me glad knowing you are sticking with me on this one. :)

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/11 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Mr. Big Ben.... Part 1

aww, poor Big Ben. Sounds like a nice guy, i'm curious to see how Nick will help him out. Keep up the great work Ritz!

Author's Response: He's really a nice guy. Thank you for sticking with me and I hope you are not yet bored with this story. I promise some action in the next chapter after Big Ben. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/11 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Mr. Big Ben.... Part 1

Good to see a new chapter and a new challenge for Nick!  Wonder what he'll have to do for Big Ben.



Author's Response: Yay! I am glad I am not making you bore on this story... just 2 chapter more and I think we'll have some action here. lol Thanks, Steph!