Date: 07/08/13 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Brian's 30th... and Michael who?
What a cliffhanger!
And, poor Brian, what a birthday! lol
It's interesting this new power that Nick has discovered to possess. As I said, I'm really loving the plotline.
Author's Response: It's good to know that you're still into the story. Thank you very much,
Date: 01/31/12 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Brian's 30th... and Michael who?
Whoa... What is happening? Some sort of flashback or something? Craziness!!
Author's Response: Yep! Carter needs some action.... lol Wow, you have no idea how huge the smile you brought to my face now. You just made my night. Thank you!
Date: 01/23/12 04:43 am Title: Chapter 11 - Brian's 30th... and Michael who?
Haha I like how poor Nick sounds nuts sometimes. The guys are proly worried about him.
Oh no I think he had a flash of something Michael did in that exact restaurant he's in. He's really gonna look nuts hiding under the table..
Author's Response: Yay! you are reading again... Glad to see reviews from you, babe. I loved that scene, Nick was carried away and hid under the table. lol Thank you for reading again and leaving review! :)
Date: 10/30/11 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Brian's 30th... and Michael who?
Aww, I hate being so far behind. I always lose track of wehat I have read and what i still need to read. First off, yay to being in Hershey. That's pretty close to where I live. That gave me a warm fuzzy feeling. Is that odd? lol I love this new element of Michale not being happy. Every good supernatural story needs a villian! Can't wait to see what happens next and because i'm behind, I don't have too!! *goes to read the next chapter*
Author's Response: You live in PA? it's not odd at all... lol I am following the boys' Never Gone Tour Itinerary, just not in the same order though. I am glad everyone liked that twist about Michael. I am soooo happy you are still reading, Mare. Because you told me that if you don't like where the story is going you might just stop reading. Thank you!!!! :)
Date: 10/23/11 10:49 am Title: Chapter 11 - Brian's 30th... and Michael who?
So, I gotta say, I LOVED that line, "Jeez Brian, you talk Leighanne now!" LMFAO!!!
But, you've managed to do it again with yet another chapter... thinking and writing outside the box! The way you introduce these ghost characters to us really intrigues me! And man... just when I thought the "Michael" ghost was a good guy, you have someone to make Nick wonder again about this mysterious fellow. Unless... unless the girl isn't a good spirit, and perhaps a bad spirit that doesn't want these souls to cross over. Hmm...
I love the way you wrote Nick going into a "vision", so to speak, of him being present during a shooting that happened in the restaurant it seems. And how he connected back with the presence, and still couldn't separate the two. Man... he's got a lot of explaining to do I suppose for shouting what he did! "/
Author's Response: Why do we keep loving the same lines? LOL . For the record, I love Leighanne! :) Blame it to Nick, he was the one who decided that Michael isn't a good guy after all. lol. It was the first vision he saw and thought it was really happening. Poor Nick. I hope you won't get tired of my Thank Yous.... :)
Date: 10/13/11 11:21 am Title: Chapter 11 - Brian's 30th... and Michael who?
So he had a premonition? I wonder if it's something that's going to happen where they are, or to someone else though? Will be interesting to see what happens next Ritz :)
Author's Response: it's kind of a vision. Hopefully your answers will be answered in the next chapter.... Nick is being so creative and convince me to give him another 'gift'. LOL Thanks for reading, Steph! :)
Date: 10/12/11 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Brian's 30th... and Michael who?
Oh interesting. He is having visions of how people died now? hrm...
I love how he covered the "What!?" LOL great bit of humor there, I could totally picture him responding like that too.
Can't wait to see what's going to happen next.
Author's Response: Yep. Nick convinced me to give him that 'gift' too... lol. I really can't fool you that it's a live action scene right? lol I'm glad it really sounded like it was a vision.... Thank you, Lore for you awesome review as always. :)
