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Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/13 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Andrea

Interesting chapter. New informations, though they're still a little bit vague.

I don't know if you are going to talk about it in the future chaps but I'm trying to figure it out what it means when Andrea said that Micheal is a broken soul. I guess that, just like every "battle", there has to be the good side and the bad side and what had pushed Micheal to chose one instead than the other. (I admit that sometimes I prefer villain rather than the heroes because there is so much more work to build them as characters. Great characters.)

I'm so loving all those little things between Brian and Nick. lol Only Brian can know when Nick is lying or not. lol



Author's Response: I love how you write a review. It's very honest and straightforward. Thank you for that. Your reviews are very well appreciated. :) I really find it hard to write a story with a little bit of mystery. I don't know if I have given just enough information. Sometimes, because you dont want to give away too much, you restrict the details in the story not knowing it comes off as a little vague to the readers. I hope all your questions will be answered soon. :)

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/12 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Andrea

Oh geez... Everything's about to get so much more complicated, huh? Great job! :)

Author's Response: Well, with Nick everything gets complicated... lol Thank you for the reviews, dear. :)

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/12 05:04 am Title: Chapter 12 - Andrea

Birthday prank! lol. Oh Nick...

I'm afraid this Michael guy is gonna hunt down Nick and do something. Not boring at all Ritz!

Author's Response: Thank you!!!!! Glad you are still enjoying this.... :)

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/11 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Andrea

Aww, I LOVE the back story of Michael. He reminds me of that character in the Ghost Whisperer. The one who didn't want people to cross over after that plane crashed. I miss that show! lol I like Andrea. You've created a really great original character! :O)



Author's Response: He was actually kind of based on that character in Ghost Whisperer, just don't expect a full battle between the good and the bad. lol Happy that you like Andrea because everyone else has suspicions about her. lol Thank you, Mare! it's actually better that you are behind cause your reviews made my day. :)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/24/11 10:12 am Title: Chapter 12 - Andrea

Not a boring chapter at all Ritz, it's good to have some chapters like this where we're getting some background information.  I hope this Michael doesn't do anything to hurt Nick though.

Looking forward to more :)



Author's Response: Awww thank you, Steph! I am so glad you are still reading this story... :)

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/11 10:55 am Title: Chapter 12 - Andrea

Poor Nick... to have people's eyes on and think you're crazy is not a cool feeling! Especially when what you're going through would be enough to make ANYONE feel like they're going crazy!

But, ahh... this is THE Andrea! So, I guess Nick was right with his uneasy feelings of Michael! And totally random, but reading how spiritual this story is, you would've been the perfect collab person I could have asked to work with me on my Archangels story! ^_^ Lol. But anywho, this is all getting so interesting!

Of course, I'm still in love with this story and I seriously can't WAIT for the next chapter!! ^_^



Author's Response: Yep poor confused Nick. I really hope Andrea would help him not make him more confused. :) Can I favorite this review? LOL. If you have asked me to write that story with you, I would have turned it down because you write that story so perfectly well, and I would just ruin it. :) Thank you for ALL your amazing reviews.... hope you'll be with me until the end of the story. :) *hugs*

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/11 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Andrea

Wow Michael is gonna go after him. I hope he is careful. I wanna know more about his gift. I hope that everything goes okay.

Author's Response: I hope so too.... Thanks for still reading, Lore! :)